Reviews for Happy Little Birthday
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2015
Oh dammit! I forgot it was renjis birthday yesterday! Im such a dumbass
LunaticV chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
aaw, it's so cutee! XD
Haunt of twilight chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
that was cute!
Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
That was awesome, I loved it and great job
Captain Mal SIR chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
yes tickle him renren! nice story uchiha-san (i has oc so im being weird sorry)
Kuron chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
Naughty, naughty naughty. Me likey.
aldree chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
sweett.,
StrayDogAndTheMoon chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
Byakuya Bo acting so childish..cute and funny.
kiiroi yumetobu chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
m chocolate strawberries and cream and yaoi *drool*
reicheruchan chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
byakuya is so cute! i want to hug him tightly!
motomotogirl chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
So cute! A blushing Bya is always a good thing XD
Kitsui chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
Yeah! *loves you* Loved it and english is not my native tongue but I could read it very well so .;.
Leandri chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
Byakuya blushed, hahahahha sweet, I love it everytime Renji teased him, I like your story, and hey I'm still waiting for the next chap of 'all you need is love'.

x
jwg676 chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
WOW. Another great from a great :)

I am one of the most patient people i know... keep me supplied with more of the good stuff and I'm happy...

Laura
PrettyLights chapter 1 . 1/31/2007
Awhh! This was so adorable! I love RenByaRen :) And you also remembered Byakuya's bday! Hehe. I brought cupcakes to school for his bday xD I told my teacher that if she wanted one, she had to sing happy birthday to him; cant believe she actually did. xD

Anyways, i love this! So sweet and cute :)

Just 2 lil things...

Kuchiki-taichou addressed him a cold glare “That’s not the point”

That "addressed" him part is wordy... I think it's missing the word "with"... So it'd be 'Kuchiki-taichou addressed him with a cold glare."

And

“I’m glad you like it” he said, kneeling down in front of him.

You're missing a comma after the word "it" :P After a person says something, if it doesnt have a question mark or exclamation mark, you put a comma if the sentence continues like in that one

That's all :) Apart from that, this fic's so awesome
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