Your killing me! Great story hopefully after years you will finish love you writing

Iv read part 1 and now 2...updated in 08? I'm gutted I hope u haven't abanded this story! X

I Like, I Lust, I Love! Please Update Soon!

Oooh, I cannot wait to read Riddicks reaction to seeing Jack again! Please update soon!

Well I have to say, I read part I of this story years ago and I'm still impressed as I was then; (reread it and then read part II) In my opinion you kept to the 'nature' of all the characters David Twohy portrayed in his movies; save for a few spelling errors that most people would miss, its some of the best I've read yet since then and now of Pitch Black/The Chronicles of Riddick fan-fiction. It was interesting how you introduced Kyra as a separate character from Jack (it makes a lot of sense, personally from Pitch Black to TCOR I had to keep telling myself that Kyra is Jack, I guess the time frame of her 'change' didn't sit well with me, leaves a lot for interpretation); the cut action scenes were written beautifully, with Riddick slaughtering the guards and Imam trailing behind praying, like a moving picture.

Anyways, I know others have already asked if there is anymore coming and I hopped the bandwagon. The chase begins again, what will happen when Riddick realizes Jack is still out there?

2 years...almost...can you PLEASE, PLEASE write more?

GOD BLESS!

Hikari

Oh dear, I can't see the reunion between Jack and Riddick ending well. After all, Riddick will be thrown into a loop when the truth about Kyra is revealed and then at the same time, Jack will be learning about the Imam's death. Good times will not seen for a long time, I think.

Anyway, are you going to be updating this story anytime soon? I ask because it has been over a year since the last update.

Ah what happened? You said you were back but now your gone again! its been a year! this story needs the rest of it! please continue :)

Absolutey BRILLIANT! Please continue, Please continue soon! I'm so hooked.

Sorry I didn't review on the other chapters because I was too busy reading :) This is the best Riddick story I've read, and I hope you update soon! I think you've got Riddick's character down to a pat, even when he's showing emotion - it's all very realistic. And I thought it was ingenious how you had Kyra pretend to be Jack so Jack didn't really die at the end of the Chronicles of Riddick. I would have never thought about that, though I have thought about how Jack could have possibly survived the Necros. Kudos! Please, please update soon! I can't wait to read about when Jack and Riddick see each other again. Ought to be exciting :)

okay i read the first one and bfore i read this one i wou;ld like to know are they related cuz the summury dosent seem to be?

I just got through reading both parts one and two and i absolutely love these stories! I loved the background story of Jack and the reason why Imam says in CoR "U left her when she needed u the most". That wuz a great plot. Especially havin Jack tell Riddick she loved him. Oh i wanted to cry when he just walked away.

Now ur onto another great plot. I hated them killin Kyra/Jack off in CoR. So u makin it where Kyra and Jack are two different ppl and that Jacks still alive is so unique and awesome.

I really hope u decide to keep this story alive cuz i so dyin to read about Jack and Riddick's 'reunion' and whats gonna happen wit their love story.

Hmm...Will Riddick know its Jack when they meet up? Im so anxious to find out!

Oh, THANK YOU!

~J to the M

Please! More! There is so much left unsaid in this, So much potential! Please, please, PLEASE! Continue with this story! I'm on my knees begging you, imploring you to finish polishing this little gem!

PLEASE!

Thank you,

J to the M

I like where this story is going, and love how it's narrated. :) I know you have this story as under hiatus right now, but I'd love to see an update.

You commented in your profile that it's because of a "mental snag"; I'm wondering, what kind of a mental snag can you hit with the idea of Riddick and Jack seeing each other? I can totally see explosions there. Or is it Lajunn convincing Riddick? The fun thing of being a narrator is that you can add and keep out all the details you want. Mold it into what you will, I'd like to see the product.