Reviews for Like Grapefruits
Daisy chapter 3 . 11/16/2019
That was awesome!
sapphireswimming chapter 14 . 3/11/2012
Oh man, sooooooo sad. Poor Alex, but it's true. Everything in his life is twisted and convoluted and the truth is an awful thing.

Loved these oneshots. Thanks for writing! :)

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sapphireswimming chapter 13 . 3/11/2012
I got chills reading this. It's so perfect, just like Stormbreaker, except Alex isn't dead. But everything replayed like the first story.

The title was perfect. It's all happening... again.

Man, I love it! :D

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sapphireswimming chapter 12 . 3/11/2012
Oh my gosh.

So so funny.

I am still cracking up right now.

HAHAHAHAHAHA.

Serves Tom right! XD

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sapphireswimming chapter 11 . 3/11/2012
Loved it! I'm so glad you did a sequel. This was marvelous. I liked how they were able to pull the mission off so smoothly only ten minutes after Briggs was trying to do him some damage.

Great story!

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sapphireswimming chapter 10 . 3/11/2012
Oh, I love them all together. It's great to see what things might have been like before all of this craziness began. And good for Jack, doing what Alex needs and telling Ian off when he needs to be smacked upside the head.

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sapphireswimming chapter 9 . 3/11/2012
Oh my goodness, this is so depressing. But it explains a lot. I like how you got into Ian's head and gave us some understanding of why he was the kind of father figure he was. Honestly, coming from this starting point, I think he turned out okay... for a spy.

And I think you wanted "pall" bearer instead of "poll" bearer for the funeral.

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sapphireswimming chapter 8 . 3/11/2012
Bahahahaha. Sabina's last line was the most perfect thing ever. And I love the difference between the officer's official and unofficial opinions. :)

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sapphireswimming chapter 7 . 3/11/2012
Awesome. I love these moments of discovery with K Unit. And I liked how Alex was in such baggy clothing and Snake thought he was going to utterly fail the exercise. Shows them wrong...

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sapphireswimming chapter 6 . 3/11/2012
Hahahhahaa. This idea is so incredibly great and I can TOTALLY see it happening in an Alex Rider fic. Man, I loved this one the most out of all of these so far. I think. :) It was just great. So perfect and I loved how you told it from Briggs' perspective even though we could guess what was happening.

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sapphireswimming chapter 5 . 3/11/2012
I love this. Loved it and all of the emotion that came with it. It was such a short chapter, but you really managed to pack a punch with it.

And I'm so glad you gave Jack her moment to shine. I love her so much! :3

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sapphireswimming chapter 4 . 3/11/2012
Oh poor Ben! That must be such a shocker to see the guy he thought has been dead for so long. But I'm glad he understood the situation and was able to make the right decision for the guy.

This idea would make a really great full length story, but I'm glad that you at least shared this snippet of it. :D

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sapphireswimming chapter 3 . 3/11/2012
This was soooo funny. I loved the all dialogue. I was able to tell who was talking, or at lest enough to understand the story and it was really funny. Especially when you put the ellipses in there and how you were able to go back and show snippets of all of their missions gone wrong. :)

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sapphireswimming chapter 2 . 3/11/2012
HAHAHA. So funny! I had never thought about that, since they had already used that excuse. Man, so funny. And it's also strange to see Alex in the hospital for something that wasn't MI6's fault.

Heh. Now what happens when he needs to get his tonsils out?

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sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Haha. Of all the random things he would want people to know... grapefruits. XD

Interesting beginning.

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