Reviews for The Silent Kingdom
GummyDragon chapter 7 . 6/23
I actually prefer your timeline to Nintendo's official one, which has left me with the impression that the official timeline will be revised. I never liked Four Swords Adventures occurring when it did. Not to mention that references made in BOTW suggest a single, Unified timeline that never split, although I have always been left with the impression that Twilight Princess only happened a few generations after OoT, although you have explained why the Temple of Time 'moved' so far from Hyrule Castle Town. I imagine that moving Skull Kid, or at least an enchanted forest that may be created by Deku Saplings, is easier than moving the temple. So good job, normal timeline theories induce headaches, but yours works!
Armasyll chapter 140 . 4/15
Make an AU with Link joining Midna in the Twilight :C
Sunnnyboi chapter 154 . 2/18
I have yet to read another story as good as this one. it beats a lot of real books. I wish this was a printed original book though...
Sunnnyboi chapter 116 . 1/10
nooooo, dont let Alex die, he was such a good person, please, I'm scared to go on now...
Guest chapter 154 . 10/31/2019
Loved this story.

The ending... did nobody really NOT check to make sure a sorcerer with centuries (millennia?) of experience was actually dead? LOL! I hope you make a sequel just for the reaction... Really great story.
silverhawk88 chapter 153 . 10/26/2019
wait..that boy is Link and Midna's son?! whoa!
Zeldafan72 chapter 1 . 10/23/2019
This is a great story. If it was possible to have the whole thing available as a downloadable pdf or ebook, that would be awesome. Then I could read it anywhere offline.
Darkstar248 chapter 154 . 9/25/2019
Took me a week to read all this, but it was worth it. This fic was amazing. The mix of seriousness and humor was perfect and the action was great. There were some spelling and grammar hiccups here and there, but overall this is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. I feel like this could be a printed book.
Ann chapter 13 . 8/15/2019
Time for the part where we need to gather things scattered in dungeons. yay! (sarcasm but also genuine)
I think Link should really ask who the red-armored goddess is. But he likely wont. Maybe Midna would?
Ann chapter 7 . 8/15/2019
Nice timeline! I liked how you spread the timeline out so far, putting hundreds of years between heroes and accounting for the great flood. Child-in-a-man's-body Hero of Time, child Hero of Wind, and plucky-adventurer Hero of Hyrule definitely were the type to hunt down a foe and make sure they were dead or finish them off after defeating them instead of leaving them to the authorities (Princess Zelda, the King, or the Sages), if they even knew about how Ganon wished himself immortal like the Hero of Twilight does. Twilight's ready to stab a bitch and make sure that stab sticks - no banishing to alternate dimensions for him (though the sages did try to execute him, I'll give them that)
"He really needs a hobby" Ganon does have a hobby! Take over Hyrule! But seriously, what does he do while he's pottering about for centuries building up his power?

They're in the desert! And it appears unaffected... for now. Was Zelda's areal spell smaller because she doesn't have the power of the one who made the Spell of Silence? Or is the desert just far enough away to have been sparred from both spells? I guess I'll find out soon! And it looks like Zero plans on doing something while they're trekking through the desert. What is his mistress after? The Triforce? Obviously Zero grabbed that sword - which I'm starting to think is necessary for getting the killing machine those wizards created tens of thousands of years ago before banishing it between dimensions. (Was that abonimation Demise? That'd be an interesting tie-in). I'm excited to find out!
Ann chapter 6 . 8/15/2019
So, Ganondorf is contained. ... For now. Even banishing him to another realm couldn't keep him out of Hyrule and away from the other two triforce pieces. Magical wards though, that's interesting. It might slow him down a bit; shame he's got the triforce of power. At least he's (probably) not the one behind all this.
Hyrule is now utterly silent. Once Link, Midna, and Zelda leave nothing will be moving in the land, not even the wind. I can see how this would turn into a legend. Maybe neighboring lands (not separated by sea) have already noticed that all living matter in their neighbor is stone. Hey, is the desert stone too? All the bokoblins, bulblins, and sand worms? I bet the Great Fairy was Not Happy before she to was turned to stone (if she couldn't hold it off and out of her cave).
Anonymous chapter 154 . 8/10/2019
The fact this story ends on an uneven wordcount when it was so close to being a nice, even 1.1 million words will forver bother me.
Ynot364 chapter 154 . 8/4/2019
Thank you for this conclusion to this epic story! I'm curious if that hooded figure was perhaps Ganondorf somehow? I can't wait for the new story! See you then!
Ynot364 chapter 153 . 8/4/2019
This was a perfect ending to this story and I loved every moment of it! You're incredibly talented in telling a story naturally and creating in-depth characters and Ganondorf was probably one of my favorites. I do wish that he at least got to know he had a son too but his redemption arc and a literal middle finger during his death was spot on for your characterization! Gosh I'd say more profound commentary but it's all eluding me as this story really sinks in!
Wonderful conclusion well done sir! A cookie and gold star for you! Bravo!
I can't wait to read the sequel and the epilogue!
Until we meet again in another story!
Ynot364
CountOrlok777 chapter 18 . 8/2/2019
yay! its a haunted house!
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