My only suggestion is to make her turning 45 or 55. 35 is not really old at all and if Kaddar isn't feeling old himself, he would say he was getting tired at dancing. Make them actually older...you can even keep the same lines. "She was turning 55 but felt 20 years older." It seems more appropriate.

wow, this is an awesome and touching peice of writing.

I'm glad i found it!

~Everlookingforsparks-Nat

good story! :P

I really liked this-the romantic stories of people we young people think are too old for love. Genius.

I like your oneshots, so make some more and turn them into another story!

That was so beautiful and wonderfully written. I loved it. So very, very sweet. You're style is very smooth and your characters are believeable. I'm adding it to my favourite stories list.

That was so beautiful!

Gem, my dear, you are an amazing writer. This story made me cry, it was so beautiful!

I'm going to be putting both you and this story on my favorites list. Good job.

Lady Mage

Amazing. I love Kally/Kaddar.

THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL!

I quite liked this story, the writing was excellent, and I thoroughly enjoyed the plot and conflict. Honestly, I cried and I have no idea why. Wonderful writing, keep up the good work!

TTFN TA TA FOR NOW!

Wow, a dedication. I feel so honored

I love what you've set up here, I've never seen Kallydar that had them beyond I think their twenties, so seeing how they aged was a rare treat indeed.

I like how Kalasin is quite bitter, but how Kaddar is at the same time still loving. Though I wonder why Kally didn't use her great healing gift on herself. A block perhaps?

Either way, I found this to be bittersweet, but not angsty, a hard measure to find sometimes.