Magnificent, brillant story! Thank you so much! I really enjoyed Shep Not knowing what was real and his nightmares and flashback! Well written and perfect capture of all the characters!

Absolutely stunning ! Great story-I Love the mind tricks and Shep‘s despair! Thank you :)

I know you wrote this eons ago, but I just found it and wanted to say how much I enjoyed it! You put John through the wringer, and it was a much more believable journey than most. I loved interaction between Sheppard and the honorable wraith. Thanks for a great read!

This is a truly incredible write, kudos to you. I'm sorry that I didn't review each chapter, I kinda stayed up til 1am binge reading the entire thing. You're amazing, don't stop writing, please:)
There's a couple of small errors in the later chapters (grammar/typo errors), if you want me to point them out to you sometime feel free to pm.
You are totally awesome:)

Wood awesome fic :-)

I had a great time reading your story! Loved the concept and seeing how John escaped the planet.

Really excellent story, one my top 10 favorites! Loved the humor, the angst between friends and Todd, the story line was fun and had plenty of adventure as well as hurt/comfort. Nice incorporation of the IOA, The Trust and Col Caldwell. Loved the addition of Snacks, you write very well. I just wish you had written more stories, maybe someday you will come back to it.

Thanks for writing and posting this story. I greatly enjoyed reading it

Loved this story!

WOW, 2014...and I just read this. Wonderful read! I was hooked from the beginning. I refused to stop reading it. I hope you've kept up since then.

I have just finished reading this some years after it was written, which was great as it was all there complete to just flip the pages & read, which i did non stop over a day. I loved the story, full of descriptive feelings & thoughts...very scary in parts, the torture scenes were quite hard to read & had me cringing.
Bringing back our favourite Wraith to get to know was genius & comforting to show that we are not all the same, human & wraith alike.
I loved the added bright sparks of 'Snacks' to lighten the story & the little beastie gave Sheps something to hold on to, being a cat person i related to Snacks & want one too.

In all, i found your work riveting, exciting & a great read...Thank you.
Best wishes, Hala. x

Amazing story! It's very well-written, readable... I love it! Really do!
I enjoyed reading it... :-)

great story!

This was an excellent story. I loved how you incorporated the Wraith and the Gift of Life. It was also nice to see that it sometimes takes Shep a long time to recover from captivity! Personally, I didn't care for the whole Trust thing. I think that it could have been left out entirely and the story could have gone on without a human baddie, but I really loved the rest of the story! Thanks for writing!

What an amazing chapter! You totally captured Rodney's personality and how he tried to get Sheppard to snap out of his delirium. I can't wait to read the rest!