I wish you would continue this story, it is breathtakingly beautiful.

Reading this, I knew I was in for some heartache, but I didn't think it would include not having an update since 2008. Well, I did, but I read anyway, my only regret being that there's no more story! T_T

Please come back and write more! I want to know if there could be a happy ending!

I love this story. I know it's been a while, but I wish you would finish it.

This is very well done. I love the style. I just wish you'd decided to finish it.

Oh, CS how I miss you so! It's a tragedy how you are no longer updating this beautiful story.

SMA

It's funny how I commented on the 2nd chapter first (can you comment more than once on a chapter?)...

Anyways, I can't help but notice the lack of... vocabulary in this version... the old one just seemed more... gushing with syntax... although i understand why you toned it down ;;

WAH! I feel so completely stupid! Since reading your original story and having reread it only recently, I FINALLY understand why you took down your story and basically re-wrote it...

Haha, really I'm such an air-head!

I'm glad you chose to do so (although to be honest, I was quite in love with where the original story was going). At least you went with your gut and decided to re-work everything instead of leaving it where it was and never being satisfied. I can't wait to see how this new one plays out and what the fate of all the characters are.

I have a question, you did the old version's Rheiya turn into a flame or something? I honestly can NOT remember... :/

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Chelsea

This story is beautiful, I hope you didnt abondon it!

I recall typing a review awhile back, but I couldn't help but comment that your story is a refreshing change from the usual fandom fare. I sincerely look forward to whenever you finally decide to update on your story. :)

interesting. faved

I love this story! I have been looking for it forvever.

I was reading it a while ago and decided to look for it to see if it was updated. But i remember it having a lot more chapters.

Am i crazy?

This is one of the best most interesting story i read for a long time. looks like you havent updated in a while. hope you do thought because this is just like a book you cant put down. update please!

OH! You must finish this story! If you did, it would most certainly be considered a classic sm ff! There is no other romantic mystery like it! It's so dark, but hopeful none the less. Wherever you've disappeared to, please come back!

Oh I LOVE this story! I hope you update soon! Thanks for the lovely long chapters! :0)

Wow, awesome story so far! :0)