Could be better

It's too bad this isn't finished, it's interesting

I LOVE IT, KEEP WRITING PLZ, do not give up PLZ

I like a lot, more soon?

WOW! Just found this and I love this. Such a unique story idea. I know this story is unfinished but I hope you will pick it back up at sometime. :)

I would like to let you know I found this today and enjoyed and loved the 8 chapters you posted! I see it has been a few years since it has been update, but I sure would be interested in reading more if you decide to post more. Thanks for posting what you have posted.

Ever thought of finishing this one? It's quite good. Love the twist on cannon. I'd read it if you posted a chapter!

Hello,

I just wanted to drop a quick line letting you know how much I love this story. I love how you have written everything and how you have inserted Lilly into the story, but still keeping part of the original story the same. So, please please please updated again and soon. Keep up the great work and have a lovely day.

Smile,

Macala A.

Wonderful!

I'm loving this new Duncan and Lilly. Lilly's behavior is something I can totally see her pulling once it became obvious V wasn't acting like her little worker bee. And Duncan - giving him Logan's harshness - is genius. We normally don't see him like this in Fanfics. I can't wait to see more about LoVe!

i aint gonna lie...i love it :D cutest story iv read so far. i like the way you havent made it seem mushy or cheesy lool xxx

Great story.

LOVE IT!

I love this story so much. PLEASE don't break Logan and Veronica up. I will be so sad! I think that Meg and Duncan are a great couple. But I have always hated Duncan! Lily and Veronica's fighting scenes are very well described. I think that the "burns" are really good. I love Veronica and Logan together. They are so cute. I also think that Lynn being in the story more is good. Keep on writing!

I really hope you update the fic soon! That last chapter was really sweet!