I really hope you continue this, this is very good so far! I'm excited to read what happens next

Going to be honest, I have mixed feelings about Wakka and Lulu completely turning on Tidus like they did in the first chapter. They all liked him well enough by the end of story, so it's not like they saw him as some evil monster who was only out to seduce their little sister. I do understand their initial anger though, considering they must know better than anyone how strict and set it it's ways the people of Spira are. That being said, if the people could forgive Lord Braska for wedding an Al Bhed so easily after he, temporally, defeated sin and were thus able to become so accepting of his daughter, then why can't they do the same for Yuna and her offsring after she brought them, not a temporary, but an eternal calm? Additionally, even if they are angry, wouldn't a relatively simple fix be for Yuna and Tidus to become engaged, or try and get married before the baby's born. It would still be concieved out of wedlock, but at least it would be her fiance/husband's child!

I am also unsure why Wakka and Lulu chose not to share their concerns over the subtle changes they've noticed in Tidus with Yuna. I feel like explaining their actions and concerns, instead of just getting upset and confining Yuna to Besaid is something at least one, if not both, of them would have done. Honestly, if Yuna can just get Besaid, her home island, to accept her, does it really matter if the rest of Spira doesn't, as long as they let her live her life in peace? ...After Tidus gets an exorcism of course!

As for the overall story line itself, I found it a fascinating concept! What would have happened if Shuyin had merged with Tidus' lingering essence? Is he still planning on reclaiming Vegnagun and destroying Spira or are his motives different in this story? Maybe he's going to try to get Lenne's spirit to take over Yuna's body or try to steal either Tidus' or perhaps even the baby's body for himself, or Lenne, once the gender's determined? Or is this version of Shuyin actually not lying about being a "good guy" and there is turly something worse than him/Vegnagun coming up? Kinda looking forward to finding out!

this is stupid. you made Lulu and Wakka a bunch of asses for now reason. I got so frustrated that I threw my phone, lol. seriously though, you made them so out of character that it is kind of disgusting. I understand slightly changing their personalities and how they behave but in this story's case, you completely altered it.

I'll be honest and say that I wish I never found this story. Wakka and Lulu's response is fine since they see Luna as a younger sister, and of course blame Tidus but they also know that Luna is a big girl and should have listened to her after a few days of calming down. Them not listening to her and attacking Tidus made me sick to my stomach. Once again I'll be honest I want back the 20 mins I wasted reading this. Again, honestly you did a good job at writing this story, but it's not for me.

I just started reading this story and I already like it. I have always been a fan of final fantasy 10 and the Tidus x Yuna paring. Don't give up and continue on this holy journey.

Thank you for updating! In what seems like a dying fandom nowadays, it's nice to see someone other than myself from way back continue to pump out Tidus & Yuna stories. Been following this story for years. I hope you continue to update on a regular basis, so we can eventually all read this fic's dramatic conclusion. Keep going. Don't give up. People are still reading this.

I'm with Tidus on the whole wanting answers. I just wanna scream "What is going on here?!" but then I'd get funny looks from people XD I have an idea who that voice is.. but the talk with the fayth has me rethinking... hmmm.. Interesting stuff! Keep it up!

It's nice to see you finally update this story. I just wish we didn't have to wait so long in between posts. Keep up the good work, but work faster please. :P

Thank you for the update. I'm really hooked :) Keep it up!

Oh my! I am really loving this. But the cliff hanger... oh my goodness! I'm hooked :) Please update soon!

I have to say I really enjoy how you portray Kimhari. He would always be loyal to Yuna no matter what and you show it well. So the others are noticing something's off with Tidus, hopefully they'll be able to remedy that soon! I don't want him to go into another fit of rage and hurt someone!

Well.. that escalated quickly. Not sure how I feel about this chapter. You did a good job writing it but.. Idk. I guess I've always had it stuck in my mind that Tidus and Wakka are the best of buddies. It's hard for me to see him being so upset with Tidus let alone beat the crap out of him. I do understand Tidus beating him up though. That has to do with the "figure" he met while he was gone so Tidus isn't really himself when he beat Wakka up.

I can already tell my heart is going to hurt reading this T-T haha Good chapter.

"Fallen into Tidus' lustful trap" Awww.. poor guy being seen as a sexual deviant. That little phrase both made me sad and laugh. Mostly laugh. XD haha As if the guy would ever force himself on Yuna like that. I mean they had that kiss buuuut I'd say it was pretty mutual. Like the whole Yuna asking him to "make love with her" thing was. They'll get over it eventually.

I freaking love you Kimahri! Comforting Yuna like that was just perfect, probably better then Rikku doing it even since Rikku has known for awhile what they did. Rikku's theory was a pretty good one too. Yay for Kimahri pointing that out too! XD

I'm extremely nervous for what this "figure" has planned... Great chapter!

Oh ho ho! I wasn't sure if Tidus would be in this or if it would just be Yuna/baby and cast. I'm excited though that you seem to have a plan with him in it! I'm banking on that strange figure being Shuyin. Curious to see what's next!

Update pls ;-;