I had the fortune to meet the awesome writer behind this fanfiction when Multiply (blog) was still around. I made a review about this one in 2008 and she came across my writing. As a fan of great writers who have a keen sense of beautiful word plays, I asked her how Sasuke died.

“Not suicide. He just took on mission after mission and finally kicked the bucket.”

This revelation was more harrowing than suicide because it would be out of character for Sasuke to take his own life. He was more of a spent shell that was breathing just to live and see what tomorrow will bring.

This is such a well written story and that is the reason why I am crying nowMy chest was aching the whole time I was reading this brilliant work. You are very talented to be able to awake such strong emotions.

Thank tou

This is such a well written story and that is the reason why I am crying nowMy chest was aching the whole time I was reading this brilliant work. You are very talented to be able to awake such strong emotions.

Thank you

wow, what a story. really enjoyed my time reading your story, I don't mind if they were OOC this is an AU and what a great one. seriously, one of the best I've ever read.

I'm sad about their deaths though it's predictable since Sasuke was too dense and over his head about losing her and Sakura would at some point crack. It was beautifully written, good job!
cheers xx

omg the end of this story broke my heart I had tears in my eyes. this story is wonderful.

the writing and descriptions are good.. the smut is just, wow..
but.. I am disgusted with the main characters, they're both awful and pathetic in this story. I know it's to be expected with the premise. I want to know how this ends and I want to finish the story. I don't think I can with my state of mind though. perhaps I'll try to finish this in the future.. I enjoyed your writing but the story is just not my cup of tea.

thanks still for sharing your work, the lemons are hot.

This's heat breaking but really good. TT

How did Sasuke die?

It is a sad ending but i don't see it going any other way. Thank you for putting this up. Although I'm curious about Sasukes death. I do appreciate how this ended though. some times if it's just too convenient you don't learn to appreciate the twist. Great job.

So Sasuke also died? but how? suicide, maybe?

So how did sasuke died?

Why would they want to kill you? If they were proper adults they will read the story and enjoy it, even that the ending is ... crushing. The story IS angst so they should know better. I loved every bit of it, thank you and Good Job!

This is so heart breaking, Sasuke such a bastard but love how he finally admit he loves Sakura. Too much drama in a day for me. I just feel so damn deep sad for Sakura. How can you create such a heart aching story. I don't know how to express how sad and mad and omg much more I am. Too sad to read it again, can't handle them pain. Thanks for such an awesome story. Just some grammars here and there but overall you deserve an A

i wish it was naruto's child.. though there's no narusaku lemon scene, i think its better that its not sasuke's.. just a payback for going beyond naruto's back.. heheh anyway, nice story and i hope for more.!
both guys are HOt so, lucky sakura!;)

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B-but...
but...
No...
i am sad now.