Wow! This sounds super good and with those last 2 lines u had me caught love it already. update soon please!

Honestly, I don't know where I want Danny to go. Chet's just using him - even though it is (and will) hurt him... Basically, I just want Tim to just ease up on the poor kid - I loved this chapter for that one scene in the end specifically where they all sat around to protect him.

I'm learning and hearing a lot about child abuse right now, so this entire story is really hitting home, and it's actually kind of hard to read because I tend to get quote, well, emtional, hehe. :)

So please, please save Danny from any more hurt!

(ps, get better soon, and keep updating! :D)

Uh this flipping story rocks! Oh man. It touches so many nerves cause its somethings that could totally happen. Plus it has Tim in it! I love it more than you know!

Amazing! I love updates for The River King.

I really like how you manage to incorporate The River King members - I personally am a fan on Riggs. I'm really interested to see how you get from here to the scene in the first chapter.

Please update soon?

OH man...YIKES. This is going to turn out bad for danny. Great story btw.

I'm glad to see you finally updated! I feel so bad for Danny and just wish that someone would just give him a stable home and family. I just wish fate would play fair for once x(.

THIS STORY ROCKS! pLEASE UPDATE SOON! Man I can't believe Blake gets caught. The poor kid has it ruff all over.

Okay, never mind... I want him with his Daddy :(

I just want to give him a father figure! So please, pretty pretty please, let him be saved!

...

please?

HOW DID I MISS THIS?

Wow, I begged you forever to update this then missed the updates! What kind of fan am I!

So sad, and I really wish Tim and Danny could get along. I know Tim isn't exactly capable of love, but come on ... please, Tim?

Okay, off to read the next chapter! (That I can't believe I missed!)

Wow! This is interesting. Tim & Curly's step bro is an ex- or not River King next in line leader!

nice to see an update :)

good chapter

wowww i loveee the storyyy! finish it!

wow it{s nice to see you're back! so time doesn't have patience huh?

I love this story. I like it when people add another guy into the mix. One girl just doesn't even out the testosterone and the whole story sounds out of it usually.

I also like how you created a whole gang and not just Danny.

Kudos to you. Please update soon!

sorry i didn't review last night, but I must say this is my new favorite stories. I still love all your others, but this one takes the cake.

I just went back to the first chapter (teaser) and I nearly started crying ... :( i don't know why, maybe it was the song i was listening to as well, but seriously, there was so much than just words there. I seriously hope you update soon, cause this story is probably my addiction.

Oh! and if you're ever looking for something to write (which I doubt, lol, you have million of stories going on at once hahaha) I would really like to see something about Danny when he was little, or during his time of addiction ... that seemed like a really big story, :)