I love this oneshot, it's really, amazing, so amazing that I added it to my favorites and I want to read more of these two! So keep up the great work, I'll be keeping an eye out on you and your future works! Keep up the great work!

Amazing i love it. i feel like you captured stansfield's personality fantastically well

you wrote a romance themed story that wasnt just random - there was a background story that tied the two characters together.

and a big thing i .

you suceeded in righting a fan-fiction without altering the original character.

bravo!

you are my hero of fan-fiction writers :)

I like this! As a general rule, I like 'Leon' fanfics that predominantly feature Norman Stansfield in them! Mind you, I don't know how Joanne Pesci (see 'Stansfield's Immortal Beloved') is going to react to this 'other woman' (Penny) in Stan's life! LOL!