Can we have a second part to this? With more solembum/caleb and a new evil? Could write about restoring the alliances among the factions to fight the new antagonist mixing in calebs life as an immortal and carvahall being rebuilt.

Caleb would't have smiled at those Words from Glaedr, not after his confrontation with the elves, and epecially the queen. Well, at least in my opinion. In my mind, I can see him collapse completely, falling to his knees, tears pouring down his eyes at the acceptance he really hadn't expected, even if not from an elf, from an elfs dragon. He didn't expect it, couldn't even conceive the possibility and would have reacted strongly. I think. And would have explained his rather stonghanded ction against Oromis later. Still, just my take on the situation. Still a great story, even if I tend to pick at the details. Sorry (or not, since I actually posted it, but still in good meaning, loving the story!).

Seriously. Whether I like Slash or not should not be an issue. You are the only one who deciedes how the story goes on. Do not allow others to decide; do it yourself. Personally, I love Slash, butthat should not influence your decition. Decide whatyou likeand go on from there. But make sure it is your decision, not other's decision. Good luck.

Oh, my. You really know how to make men weep. Which I did reading Caleb's meeting with the elven queen. It was truly powerful. Well done!

Love the story. I cried at the end, and in my opinion, no epiphany can make the end of the chapter better. It was just perfect.

You have written a lot of Harry Potter crossovers, many wonderful stories, and in my mind, AS I read ths story, I picture HP dying at some point, and being reborn AS Caleb.

Just to point out, Lucus wasn't born, he was hatched.

Loved the story. Amazing work! I do look forward to reading more of your works. I have to say there is only about five inheritance stories that i liked, and this is definitely one of them.

Keep it up

KEep it up

Amazing chapter! Keep up the great work

Keep up the great work.

Cute

LOL, love the ending to that chapter. The confrontations are very well written

Amazing work, Love the interactions between characters

Awesome Story! Love it

Awesome!