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"I silently thanked God for giving me the wisdom to have shaved my legs this morning"

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

I loved that.

Is that the end of the story or is there more? If there is more then please update. I like it alot.

I like the story. Keep going.

wow this is very good! not the best that ive ever read but getting there very good!

was this a joke?

Well this is looking good unless that was the end then it was still good I hope it wasn't.

please write more! that story was so wonderful i truly loved it. im begging you to please contiune this story. it was the best Edward/bella fanfiction i have ever read. the way you wrote it wasnt blunt or smutty but sweet and loving...i love the detail about the bruises, it might be messed up of me but i find that really romantic...like a mark that she's his or something. but really and truely i really loved it so much please i am begging for you to continue this, i need more!

Great job so far! Too many write about a perfect Edward/Bella "experience" when in all reality, it is very unlikely for that to happen. I also loved the Jacob involvement. The only criticism I have is a few grammar mistakes here and there but otherwise, wonderful.

Waiting with baited breath for the next installment,

~Prancing Flamingo~

o this is so good i can't wait for an update!

great story, please update the next chapter!

that was realy realy good! i think u should update i wana kno wat happens next!

holy crow! you cant leave that kind of cliffy are you asking for a death wish from readers?

i love this fanfic! i know it has been several months since you were writing this, but i hope you will update the story (such a cliffy). i really want to see what happens with bella and also the reaction everyone has to her brusies.

wow this is really godd...u hav to update soon!