| Reviews for Hitsugaya's little problem |
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HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 10 . 1/29/2009 great chapter/story. |
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 9 . 1/29/2009 great chapter. |
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 8 . 1/29/2009 wow, rough ride |
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 7 . 1/29/2009 cool hot BOTH! |
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 5 . 1/29/2009 great chapter. |
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 6 . 1/29/2009 intresting |
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 4 . 1/6/2009 great chapter. |
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 3 . 1/6/2009 FUNNY, great chapter. |
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 2 . 1/6/2009 great cahpter. |
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 1 . 1/6/2009 great start/chapter. |
White Wolf Prince chapter 2 . 9/26/2008 omg that was funny what zaraki said hmm must be daz hah got me in stiches. |
ChargingBuck chapter 1 . 6/30/2008 Sweet. Very descriptive. I liked it. |
GrnEydDvl chapter 10 . 2/27/2008 I loved that the story was about the kids. I liked their abilities too. Although I can't believe you killed Ichigo! Oh well, nice story. |
Anago chapter 2 . 11/18/2007 Um... It's kinda weird! Well not that weird. I REALLY cant imagine hinamori pregnant with Toshiros baby and I cant imagine them two getting married. No offense but I think no one really matches Toshiro Hitsugaya. Next chappie is coming out on ~A SUDDEN FIT~ Bye XOXO Ejoong |
Katty008 chapter 10 . 7/7/2007 Good plot, but I have one tad little complaint. When you do spell check, check grammer too. Because a lot of your words are spelled wrong but it's right for a different word. It makes it REALLY hard to read sometimes, and it's a bit of a hassle that might deter some readers. Such as 'minute' and 'minuet'. Grammer will definitely not pick it up half the time though, so reading over it very carefully, and possibly with a dictionary in hand, might help. Because "Wait a minute" means 'hang on a sec' while "Wait a minuet" means 'there's a minuet and I want to dance one more time before we leave', except with bad grammer. |