Reviews for Flashbacks: 1 - Nine Months
Ryvaken Lucius Tadrya chapter 1 . 6/12
There is no "adult ADD." ADD is for life. Misdiagnosed kids are "cured" by maturity and those of us who actually have atypical brain chemistry learn to cope. It never just goes away or gets better.

I'd find Todd's hesitation reassuring. When facing graft sacrifice, the only people who do not hesitate are the desperate, the foolhardy, and the uniquely blessed. No one could know their readiness foe such trials until facing them.

As someone who was closer to 11 pounds than 10, can confirm Elisa is not in for fun times. Time to consider the MacDuff approach.
snuggy29 chapter 4 . 4/12
Great update. It filled some bmanks to. I love to see the inter action between Elisa and Desdemona bonding as sisters. Then Trinity and Xander married and having a baby. I love it.
Please keep up the good writing.
Update soon.
vbartiste chapter 4 . 4/12
Wow Thanks for the update.
i really enjoy your writing
i wonder is this story the continuation of your B.A saga?
which i cannot wait To read more about.
Traitor of All Traitors chapter 4 . 4/12
Now I'm curious as to how Desdemona/Coldfire was restored to flesh and blood after being revived in a machine body?
Robo Reader 21 chapter 3 . 12/15/2019
I guess having a hybrid baking in her oven really heighten Elisa's sense of smell. Something for the doctor to take note on.

Ben & Jerry's ice cream. The weakness of anyone on a strict diet.

With how Elisa was acting, I thought she was gonna try to climb the walls. I'm sure there are small holes the clan used to scale up.

Truly beautiful moment between mates.

And, in the end, Goliath can do a good job changing a diaper. I love seeing baby Trini. So cute imaging her chewing on her little fist.

And now with the second child, the Doctor can make comparisons on their growth cycle.
Robo Reader 21 chapter 2 . 12/15/2019
The mighty leader of the Manhattan Clan of gargoyles. Face all kinds of powerful foes. Ganged up by the ladies of his castle. Goliath will have his revenge.

One little mistake slipped through. Elisa addressed her still unborn child as a girl despite still not knowing the gender at this point.
Homuresu Tori chapter 3 . 11/20/2019
Whether or not you can to believe it... these updates were exactly what I needed. With Disney coming out, my sense of nostalgia for this show (one of my absolute favorites) had risen to new heights. I needed something to get me through the week and thank goodness this was it! Please keep up the good work and know that I'm always grateful and humbly awaiting updates.
snuggy29 chapter 3 . 11/18/2019
Aww to funny. Goliath got her back. He was being mean at first. But it was all out of love. Great story and a wonderful surprise. Please update soon.
vbartiste chapter 3 . 11/18/2019
Wow. love it. keep up the good work
Traitor of All Traitors chapter 3 . 11/17/2019
Mood swings!
snuggy29 chapter 2 . 11/14/2019
Aww I love this chapter. Elisa seemed so mean for this.
But it was all in good fun. Goliath always takes life so seriously. Great chapter. Angela, Fox, and Desdemona all hanging out together. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Traitor of All Traitors chapter 2 . 11/14/2019
Sounds more of a comedy than something serious.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2018
Great story
JR chapter 1 . 9/14/2017
okay love the story. thought a love scene was needed to kinda get the the ball rolling and i don't know about the story ending with an argument
MadamScorpio chapter 1 . 8/14/2016
You could have continued! It was still good though! Good job!
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