tifa hissing saying telling yelling to cloud wth is wrong with you we could be having sex as gf and bf if your ass had stayed in nibelheim with me

tifa to cloud come let me give you a proper welcome home in my bed

Hmm, near the ending of the game, the creators planned for Cloud and Tifa to spend the night together in FFVII and this was infamously known as "Under the Highwind." It seemed fitting for Cloud and Tifa to do it since they didn't know if they were gonna live after the next day but I think one of the writers said it was too "risky" and changed it instead.

But this was fitting for them. I could definitely see this happening.

Hhhooooottttt dddddaaaaaaammmmnnnnnn
Gotta turn on the A.C.!

I as well have never played yhe game but have watched advent from my point anywaus is amazing. I see this as a good end to the post movie scense. Great job.

I loved it :)

Awesome. You did great despite having only watched AC. The research paid off! Really well written and in good taste (never go trashy/pornographic). Great job!

This story was beautiful. Knowing the game or not, you captured the characters wonderfully. Lovely story.

I know you wrote this a while ago but I've come back to read it again and review to tell you that this piece is still the best Cloud/Tifa fanfic I've EVER read... and to be honest, most probably the best fan fiction piece in general that I've ever read.

If I could make it my favourite of my favourites I would. I hope that you NEVER stop writing, whether its fan fictions or not, because it’ll be a sad day if you do.

Many of the reviews you already have sum up why this is such an amazing piece – particularly "Motchi", "Squeeze-the-Fish", "Sixth Night", " " and of course "SakR9".

Two of the many favourite lines (These lines are the reason I came back to re-read this fic):

"She draws a moan out of him - his first - and smiles. No matter how surreal this moment is, it's hers to keep and she's going to cherish it."

And:

"But even sweeter are the sounds she draws from him. Even a slight hitch in his breathing warms her, because she knows that it's her doing. She's finally broken past his silence.

Thanks for this AMAZING piece. The fan fiction world salutes you :)

Sweet and Smexy. There's a feeling of reality to this that's often lacking in "first time" stories. Nicely done.

This was great, seriously great. The characterization of both of them was perfect, in my amateur eyes, and it created such feeling... I can't pinpoint what exactly you wrote that inspired such emotion and ... Setting in my mind, but it was amazing. I do have to say I skipped most of the intimate scene but it seemed very well executed as well, but what I liked was the hero/damsel story, the truth and saddness in their actions...

It was just GOOD okay? Darned good. Thanks for writing and posting and please don't let anyone or anything discourage you from writing, ever. Good luck!

This story was really wonderful. I enjoyed it. :D

That was remarkably lovely.

aww you almost had me crying :') x

Wowwww... this was.. .wowwww

one thing though : "His hands move to grasp her arms and she can't remember a time when Cloud wasn't there to steady her.

Yes, I can, she thinks, and her breath catches on a gasp, half pain, half regret. But he's here now."

EXACTLY, is all I can say about that.

I loved this : "Their embrace is more for him than for her; a reminder that it's okay for him to need people, that it doesn't make him weak, that being alone only hurts that much more."

And this was the best: "He came back older and stronger but weaker somehow. And it was her that rescued him, because he needed rescuing and she didn't, and she realised a long time ago that fairytales lied. "

I got SCARED here man, SCARED : "She undoes it, slides the zipper down and isn't at all surprised to find nothing underneath. "

Nothing? I was so scared, hahahaha. Maybe you'd made Cloud into some kind of genderless android? :P

One thing is that you repeated the whole pulse point thing again at the end: "he buries his head in her throat and brushes his lips over her pulse point."

Anyhoo, FAN-TOOTILLY-TASTIC...

I loved this. It just had the right amount of... everything... in it.

GRRRRRreat!