interesting story. I am waiting for more . It's nice to read.

Excellent!

Interesting idea. Gotta say, I agree with the idea of Lance acting like an older brother to Jamie.

This was a neat surprise and the fact her father inadvertently gave them the idea to elope is hilarious.

I seriously loved this, man. Left me smiling and I hope you do more with it.

Coolness. Are you going to add to this?

i love it but i think you can still do quite alot with this. Like write about when they do come back. Maybe you could make a sequel?

Really good.

Good story!

I liked the story, but now i really want to know what happens when Lance and Kat get back. Will there be another chapter or a sequel?

I like this, short and to the point, but still enjoyable. I like the idea of Jamie being the only one who knows because he does seem the little brother type and has a clear bond with Kitty. I agree with you on the Lance and Jamie respect too. Jamie is the sweetest, I always wanted to see more interaction with him in the show.

Kinda like Lance and Kitty getting together... WB really knocked all the fun out of what Evolution could have been.

anyways- nice job with this.

Your fic is rather short, but I am intersted in where it is going. I suggest adding more detail.

nice :). OMG, i totally loved Joyride! First x:men evo episode i ever saw. it gave me a very favourable impression of the series. anyway, this is a really nice fanfic. d'you plan to continue?

please update i love it!

Intersting spin on Kitty's personality ... or should I say Kat's? I hope you're going to explore this further because I really liked this little glimps into the world of two (three if you count Jamie) favourite mutants. :)

So anyway WELL DONE!