Watch your LANGUAGE!

Well Sharak seems like he won't be around for long. He's falling apart. Hi jax finally has someone to travel with. I thought he was going to go after Kim. He said he was going to the underworld. Of course he will have to watch out for Sora and the guys. Looking forward to the next chapter. See ya

I find this story to be very well written. I hope the next chapters fall under the same standard. Looking forawrd to reading more.

I absolutely adore the story. It took me a minute to realize that Shego and Drakken were not OCs but from Kim Possible. An interesting crossover. I look forward to reading the rest.

i've read the New Era Of Darkness YEARS ago and have got it printed out in my room, but i have got missing chapters, and i was exited to see that there are sequals! i haven't read the second one or this one yet, but once i get up to this chapter, i'll give a proper review!

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Quite the amazing chapter. As usual, the attention to detail is impressive, it actually does feel like watching the movie.

Hi-Jax and Syndrome conversation towards the end was very well written. I don't know what else to say about it, it just was really impressive character moment. Ilxsa's moments in the chapter are also very interesting, and shows us more about the conflicts inside her. It's the kind of moments I wish I could do as good.

I did notice some mistakes, like how you accidently referred to Dash as 'her' at one point during the last third of the chapter, but that was about it.

I'm sorry for the late review, but I'm gonna try reading and reviewing the next chapters sooner. Keep up the excellent work.

Looks like we're back to Reflection. I originally that Reflection would be a throwaway character, but I see from this chapter that he is in fact more competent than he originally appeared. To do all of this stuff, he is dangerously close to become a complete monster. Which only makes him more interesting. Hi-Jax's, Xemnas', and Sharak's roles in this chapter were also incredibly interesting to read as well.

I'm sorry I didn't immediately review this new chapter, but I've been having computer problems and I was scrapping an entire arc that I had already started on for my fic.

I'll be trying to review more when I can, but right now, I say I can't wait to read more.

Great ending to an interesting story arc. I liked the whole chapter in general, and I don't have anything bad to really say about it. I especially like how you are keeping Sora and Hi-Jax's stories seperate for the moment.

I don't really know what else except for excellent job.

Ah, we see that the last horse has crossed the finish line. Hi-Jax was so consumed by his almost completely black and white view that he has, but it would seem that he is slowly learning that even good people have darkness. Or to put it more simply, he knows but he isn't aware of the full implications of what that concept would mean.

I was expecting Hi-Jax to figure out who Ilxsa really was, but it is understandable that he doesn't want to believe it, and tried to put off the inevitable. This will lead to some serious complications.

On another note, Sora finally enters the story, and it is only another inevitable that Hi-Jax will meet with him. This proves to be interesting indeed.

That was a funny chapter. Looks like Hi-Jax wasn't able to talk himself out of this one, and worst of all his powers are. That'll end well. Jack and Hi-Jax have good chemistry together and play well off of eachother very well.

I look forward to reading the rest of this story arc.

This was a really good chapter. The reason I believe Karall lost was because he was overconfident, and kept on ranting too much. Sternan was a cowardly idiot, and although I believe that he deserves worse for all the things he set in motion, I think his fate is perfect for.

It's good to see that Hi-Jax still retains his humanity, and I'm glad that he realized that he would be no better than Sharak if he killed Sternan. At least that's what I felt he would be if he had done so.

Great job.

Well, Hi-Jax really screwed up this time. I kept thinking "Get out! Get out as fast as you can!", but it didn't happen.

I can also see that Demona has seemed to have influenced Coldstone more than she did in the original version. This is really interesting

This is a great chapter. It is hopefully the last time we will see Vexen and Larxene. I really like how Hi-Jax went about dealing with them.

Speaking of Hi-Jak, I like the amount of character development he get's here. It helps make him believable.

I'm going to put in some more reviews soon. Sorry I haven't been doing so.

After the last chapter, this one did not feel nearly as interesting. That's not to say that it's a bad chapter, in fact it is very well written. And it raises some very interesting questions.

The part that was the most interesting was the ending of the chapter. I don't think I need to explain that bit.

Yay! Another awasome chapter.

It was a great idea to use the shockwave from the medallion to take away Hi Jax's powers. Good thinking.

Great to see that Hi Jax has met up with Will and Jack, it should be funny to see whats gonna happen later.

Update soon.