Absolutely incredible. This is the third time I’m reading this, and I just can’t get enough!

Hey look! I remembered my login info! Yaay! Okay, so the weirdest thing about me reading fanfiction is that when I read it around other people, I make no sounds, just occasionally smirking like a normal person. In privet, however, is a very different story. My happy laughter honestly sounds like a screeching seal to suddenly learned to snort. I love this story so much!

I honestly love this story so much. So, so much. I know how Lane's family is religious (with Mrs. Kim's vivacious attitude, how can you not?) , but I really adore how you're able to make it just flow so naturally with the story (religion and prayer, I mean). I've seen stories where it's just so... forced (if that makes sense). I love how you add in details about Jess' struggle with his friend's death and how that makes him better relate to Rory.

Rory seriously needs to hear that it wasn't her fault. Logan's a complete asshole who deserves very bad things. That shit is never the victim's fault. I'm so happy she managed to get out of there though.

I rather like this. It's a bit different, and I kind of wish she had stayed longer but I suppose with school there would be issues. You have a really good, somewhat sad, and interesting story here. Well done.

Constructive Criticism: When you split different POVS into separate chapters, you make it much easier to read, less confusing, and it's a cleaner look.

It's nice to come back to this tic again.

This was beautiful. Thank you!

Best writing I've come across for a GG fic... And probably one of the best I've ever come across...

recently rewatched gg and couldn't get enough of lit. So glad I found such a well written lit fic that takes me through a total rollercoaster of emotion. You prolly don't read reviews anymore, but just in case you do, what a fantastic fic!

Loved this story. Tortured but so well written. I look forward to the sequel!

This was an amazing story. I just read it all in basically two sittings. I loved your depiction of Rory and Jess and their tortured relationship, and especially loved that you gave them a happy ending. The scene at the end was a moving twist.

This story was amazing. Your quietly agonized Jess and your brave and terrified Rory are now MY head cannon too. The way you portrayed them has haunted me for days. I loved how you wrote them in this fantastic, way-it-should-have-been, novel of a story. Their thoughts, their fears, the lives and choices you gave them... All of your stories are beautiful, but this has been my favorite. Thank you.

I know this was written years ago but I still feel the need to tell you how much I loved this that it was hard to go to bed yesterday as I just couldn't stop reading. So gripping, beautiful, the literary quotes woven in. Just so Rory and Jess.

So, if you ever come across again, I would love to read the sequel.

I will never look at a cigaratte the same way again lol
love the story btw just awesome