Reviews for Incomplete |
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![]() ![]() is there still gonna be a squeal? please |
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![]() ![]() ![]() another song I screamed at the top of me lungs. wow. when Sora got hurt I almost cried again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG OUT of all the songs you chose my JAM. as soon as I saw "I tear my heart open, I sew myself shut" i started screaming the rest of the song at the top so my lungs. at 6:00 in the morning. and when he said "you're so skinny, if you turn sideways and stick your tongue out you's look like a zipper" I started dying. I've only seen the movie like 4 times my whole life. i'm loving this. your so amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG ALL THE FEELS! OMG I CRIED I'M STILL TRYING NOT TO. the song and the story was to much. I cried happy then sad then happy. i'm now so confused. I need to calm down be for I read the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sad now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Roxas time to go in to hyperactive killing machine mode or not |
![]() ![]() ![]() 3/5 for this chapter because im not really into the emperor new groove but i love your interactions between sora and roxas:) anywho on to chapter "8" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dang kairi:/ i wonder if she would feel the same way if he told her sooner Riku should of know though Besties my butt... I want nami to separate And take riku hehehehe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ello everyone :) anywho good story little confusing i wonder why rox is feeling blueee :o |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story, hoped they found each other again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Max! You brought Max in! Omg my favorite childhood movie. Memories, amazing I found it the other day too. Rewatched it. I had my suspicions for some reason and then it was mini goofy and a description, I was like its Max! Poor Roxanne though, I actually kind of liked her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww man I hope they find each other soon they already had a hard life before I say they deserve happiness... king Mickey should have yen sid make some kind of portal for sora and roxas so they could visit eachother but it was a great story thanks for the story I appreciate it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can see how sora can give in but to be emotionless I can't see sora that way it was like a chill going down my spine but its a great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know how roxas felt when he looked down I have been that high before and it isn't fun anyway on with the story its getting good |