Whaaaaaaa?! What a twist, lol!

Ah, this is really good so far! All the mystery and questions, hehe. I was reading this earlier at work during my break, and had to tear myself away, it was so good.

I'm do confused. You said this revolved around chapter 442, but in that chapter it's about when they meet briok. So why does sanji have his stubble on his chin? He doesn't have it til he's 21

Wow! This read like a really good book! Can't wait for the other two! And YAY more Mr. Acorn! Seriously, though, this fic was PERFECT :D

I think I would love this better without the romance. Good story ...great idea, but I think the romance makes it hard to swallow. I think this is as far as I can go, this is a great story ...but the romance ...has finally got to me.

I am so disappointing why you wrote about Nami past just like she gives her body to the fuckin pirates and not only once but four. Oh God if i just delete it i will. HAHA.. But it was so good story i Like it.

Pretty good! I'm impressed!

I suppose since this story is long over, it doesn't make much sense to tell you this, but just so you know, "tokeru" means "to melt or dissolve" in Japanese, so you could probably call the melting devil's fruit the "Toke Toke no Mi."

This was fabulous! Very interesting just like "A Force Against Inertia" and "Mass x Acceleration." Although I do hope what happened to the rest of the Angel of Death Devil's Fruit trilogy won't happen to the erm...what is it called...Laws of Motion(?) trilogy seeing as it looks like installment number two with Zoro has been abandoned for the last few years. I actually found this story via that drawing on DeviantArt that you mentioned. Funny how things work, isn't it? XD

This story was awesome
thank you ! :)

Interesting start :)

Whoa! Getting deep here! Three day deadline - get moving, girls!

And, of course, Sanji still refuses to kick a woman - even if that woman is a total evil child-killing vampire lady. XP Sounds like you gave a backstory besides 'chivalry' to his reasons for not kicking ladies. Curious to see when you reveal what that is.

Kenji needs to die. Yeah. Nuff said. Sold one nephew, murdered at least one another, and apparently killed off brother and sister-in-law too? Creep.

Alright! Beginning to get a handle on this Elizabeth Stoker now - man, EVIL lady! Just... well, EVIL is the only word for it. Getting to see where the plot is going too - cool! Of course I don't believe for a moment that a real fan would kill Sanji off (or rather if you did I'd hate you forever), so I'm totally looking forward to seeing how The Day Will Be Saved! And Sanji becomes that much closer to his beloved nakama and precious Nami~swan!

Ah, man, Sanji's such a sweetheart. ;_; Making everyone's favorite dishes on his 'last night', and then his beautiful farewell that totally made me cry. The flashbacks totally broke my heart to - such a cute kid.

Sanae's observations of the ship/playground (pfft!) were hilarious, and interesting how she sizes up Sanji and realizes something's wrong. Wonder what she'll be doing with this? It would be interesting to see her switch sides and temporarily join the Strawhats.

Interesting how you work in Sanji's change of attitude without going OOC - well done! And the Sanji/Nami romance is excellent so far - usually when I read Sanji/Nami I get a little disappointed at how OOC they end up (like Sanji suddenly being blind to other women's 'assets' and Nami tearfully apologizing for manipulating him).

Not really interested to be blunt in whatever this 'Iron Butterfly' is up to - but then that's the OC hater talking, so I'll give her a fair shot and wait to see what role she plays in the story. So far she's not a Mary Sue or anything. And her 'observations' of the crew have been rather entertaining, telling us of all the rumors - silly, overstated, understated, and more - swirling around about the Strawhats.