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Nice. I hope to see more of this sometime.

I don't usually read Final Fantasy fanfics, but my sister sent me the link to this story thinking I might like it.

I was looking at your summary and thinking...how the heck is that gonna work? But, I decided to read and give Cloud/Denzel/Vincent a try. I admit I wasn't expecting much...but, I was very pleasantly surprised.

I like it very much! I hope you continue writing because I would love to continue reading! cx

I nver thought der cub be such a pairin, but...dis made me change m'mind lol..and how old is denzel?

Hi! Nice to see something again from you, and good to know you haven't dropped off the edge of the net. XD This fic is still cute as ever, can't wait for more!

Hey! Long time no see! Sorry I haven't been around lately! That, or I just never ran into your story because I don't search under these characters.. Anyway!

AWW! These are SO CUTE. I love Vincent's firmness in the "you're underage, kid" department. Poor Denzel. At least Cloud will pay him some sexual attention :3 Even if it is just at the night club.

Definitely think Vince should slip up soon. Little Denzel has been so good, I think he deserves it! And goodness, he can't possibly stay 17 much longer, can he?

I love this. It's very soft and fun. More would be muchly appreciated, too. I never even considered a single Denzel-ship until this; now I'm hooked. Here's hoping for more.

Ano...are you going to make more...now? ...how about now?

Heh heh. Vincent has very good self control...but what, I wonder, will happen on Denzel's 18th birthday?

Aww. So I avoided reading this one for the longest time because the concept of Denzel in there irked me... but just today I figured out the trick to the title: Core Democratic Values, CDV, Cloud Denzel Vincent. XD wow, I'm thick. So that (plus being bored with nothing else to do) got me interested... and I read... and I like it! The style is much more solid and refined than your last one 'Gunning Down Romance', though I could be totally wrong and not remembering clearly. It's late.

It's odd reading Denzel and Cloud being together (as they are sort of father and son figures) but it's interesting nontheless.

It seems like Tifa doesn't know about Cloud's...preferences? ;)

I don't know what to suggest but just keep doing what you're doing. The chapters would be better if they were longer ;)

o totally i can't wait for more! this was so cute! "I'm at home." yeh that was the BEST .. _, i liike the sounds vicent's house makes ... lol

hell if u call that rusty then id freaking DIE to know what your 'polished' writing skills are ... and aw i love this soo much, this was awesome, so GOOD of a second chapter, i know there isnt plot and thats a reason why it may not go anywhere, but i would really like for you to continue this - heheh, id love to read more! V denzel is soo cwute, you wouldnt believe how hard it is to find denzel/cloud or even denzel/cloud/vincent ... XUX

dragonforce ... LOL - LMFAO, omg that could only be vincents phone ... lol ...

theyre playing video games omg that is so AWESOME!

X why is there no more? *pout, pout pout T-T* damnmit i think dezel is soo cwute, and with vinnie and cloudy - who obviously havent yet grown up - it think this will be so ... well, in sad way, funny - i dunno but i loves it nehow!

i love this story your a great writer,i have read some of your other storys

you ROCK \m/.