Thank you for this piece!

10/10 I can read this everyday 8D

O.o I found myself reading this 6 times in a row how good this was

wow that was amazing

Whoa... awesome story! I don't think I've ever seen a story where the author actually wrote a SCENE for each prompt, but it turned out nice! I like how all the scenes contribute to the story...

its great! 10/10 or 100% ots great please make more

Writing it in present tense certainly added a wonderful so-called... flavour to the story. I absolutely adores this story. It was beautifully written, and very fun to read. The stormy bit in the middle was a good conflict and the resolution wasn't one of those that just happen for the sake of just happening. I showed much thought and was a great ending to the oneshot. Great job. :)

I love your story, same goes for your 'Kizuna'. Great work i must say, one of the best i've ever read! *thumbs up

O_O... I stumbled upon gold! Oh wow... That whole story, even the stup of it... Was just amazing. Wow. I'll have to check out some of your other works out ahaha.

Very nice. I think the pov you used fit really well with the snippet style.

I'm not an FF member, but I felt the need to review this, because this has got to be the best KonoSestsu fanfiction written EVER!

It took a long time to read, but I was on the edge of my seat for every paragraph.

This is exteremly well-written, and the feel of the characters made me feel like this could be canon.

Overall, very VERY good job.

oh o.o

it's like the second or third time I'm re-reading this...and it was a long time I'v read for the first time.

And just now I found out that I've never reviewed before u.u

anyway ...Im doing it now ò.ó/

its great, really great. The whole story has a unique rythm, the ending is perfet *_*

Gah. Okay, so I thought I reviewed this, but FF is giving me a pop-up window so maybe I didn't. But this was gorgeous. I read this the first time around, and it was absolutely beautiful. Reading this a second time, there are so many more things I've noticed, like how you show Konoka as a lot smarter than she lets on at the fountain, and the way that Setsuna was so SETSUNA and instinctively recoiled, and how she never takes chances, and like, everything. I love this.

Ah, this was really good...Even though you wrote short scenes that give us a brief overview of the event taking place...I can feel a lot of emotion coming from each one. It's strange how that works but it did and that's awesome! XD I found myself smiling during the fluffy moments, growing sad when they distanced themselves and then grinning when they made up at the end. You're writing is amazing and I hope that you write more in the future.

Awesome story. I really liked and it was great. I do hope you update Kizuna. That is another great stories, one of the best I've read.