Aaww, so cute! XD You should totally write another chapter where Defense future Phoenix gives the drawing to Prosecutor Edgey w

But yesh. I enjoyed reading this a lot. x3;

aw that was CUTE! i like stories about them when they were little and squishy!

That was just so cute and beautiful. You should probably make a sequel -

And then, years from that time, a big envelope thing comes into Edgey's mail, and it's the picture, finished and signed. ]

Yeah, I thought I didn't like Phoenix and Edgeworth as a couple, but I've read some pretty good fics and now I don't know what to think...

AW!

W Oh my god, I have to go reread this. Hee. You're so awesome, this fanfic was a blast to read! O Aw. I can just picture it, too, it's perfect. He.

Aw, I loved it!

Of course, anything even mildly related to mini Phoenix or Edgeworth makes me happy, but nonetheless! It was so cute!

Aw! That was cute! I love how you worked Phoenix's artistic side into this (I think it was mentioned in a later game that he originally went to college for art). Shy ickle lawyer boys make me want to give them hugs. :3

This fic didn't have to be taken as a slash! I mean, they're only in fourth grade... I thought it was sweet!

Hey, did you ever think about writing a sequel set in the future when Phoenix actually shows the picture to Edgeworth?

Haha, I pull the 'I'll show you when it's done' trick to avoid actually showing anything to anyone. XD Anyway. So cute. Little Phoenix is such a doof. I wonder what would happen in the future if he actually did end up showing the picture to Edgeworth later?

Phoenix: Remember this? I drew you. :B

Edgeworth: ... That is extrodiarily creepy, Wright.

... It was cuter when they were kids, I guess.

Well, I believe that no matter how you look at it, the Phoenix/Miles pairing is meant to be! lol...but anyways, great story! :)

IT'S SO UBERLY FLUFFY! *swoons* Heheh ... Phoenix reminds me of me ... drawing everytime O_O. But I'm sorta bad at colouring ... so mai pics remain as black and white. Lol?

I noticed that some mistakes but you already point them out. So, it's okay. Haha, I don't think they were out of character. Haha, Phoenix reminded me of myself in this story.

Cute little one-shot.

Hello !

What a cute one shot ! o Phoenix and Miles are so adorable, I love them ! I don't think there was any out-of-character-ness, as far as I'm concerned...Between Miles and his "I wanna be a great attorney like my dad" and the shy Phoenix, I didn't see any problem (or maybe Phoenix was a little too depressed ?)

I found a contradiction, however : I remember Miles'lunch money was stolen during P.E, but Phoenix didn't actually skip it : he was ill that day and so was exempted (I think it's the right word ? T_T not good in english..)

Anyway, it's a pretty little mistake. Congratulations for your one-shot !