Reviews for Iron Gear
BenRG chapter 8 . 4/24/2019
"Willow, we need to have a discussion about sharing important information."

"Xander, you've built a suit of power armour. So, pot, kettle black!"
BenRG chapter 7 . 4/24/2019
So... Spend enough time in Sunnydale and the masking spell assumes that you're meant to be there and stops clouding your mind?
BenRG chapter 3 . 4/24/2019
I'll laugh my butt off if Alice isn't even slightly interested in Xander but continues to obsess over Iron Gear.
BenRG chapter 2 . 4/24/2019
Tony and Xander apparently deal with reporters in broadly similar ways!
BenRG chapter 1 . 4/24/2019
Xander, remember 'KISS': Keep It Simple, Stupid. Pneumatic stake launcher as a back-up weapon is a must until you've got the microwave cannon working at an acceptable level of reliability!
Kaiya Azure chapter 19 . 2/9/2019
Xander may not like having stuff blow up, but he may want to avoid making stuff do the opposite since anything imploding is probably just as bad if not worse.
i like cheese chapter 19 . 2/6/2019
well, it started off as a good idea and then, honestly, it just devolved into a shit show.
you jump povs way too often, and often only make clear who you're even talking about at the end of the scene.
mutlicrosses most of the time don't work well, and i'm inclined to think that you should have just stuck to buffy and avengers, maybe marvel as a whole if you could.
everybody doing the same thing, get's boring pretty fast. and angel, while not technophobic, wouldn't even begin to know how to incorporate tech into a suit properly.
i like cheese chapter 15 . 2/6/2019
well, so far fairly good. the iron man-xander convo was majorly disappointing though.
also, kendra ending up in a hell dimension that way makes no sense.
Guestinator chapter 19 . 7/5/2018
Angel knowing how to do as he has makes little sense. You see you had Xander gain his knowledge via magic, Willow has always been smart and using her for impossible technology/magic has always been a thing, Tony Stark is Effin Tony Stark but Angel?

He has never in canon shown any real experience with such things. There doesn't seem to be a reason he has the knowledge, experience, and smarts to do as he has. Yet everyone else makes sense, there are legit reasons.

It is by far one of the weakest plot points in the story.
Kudou Shinichi chapter 19 . 7/3/2018
I'm guessing Dawn got drained, but it didn't override her existence. Has Willow or Xander checked in with Giles or Buffy in months? It seems like they are so busy they have forgotten about Buffy.
Kudou Shinichi chapter 18 . 7/3/2018
I like how everyone is arming/armoring up. Willow,Xander,Angel,Kendra,Warren...
Kudou Shinichi chapter 17 . 7/3/2018
The glove is alive, there are hellmouth powered cylons getting made, and Kendra is on a one woman crusade. This is wild and fun, great chapter.
Kudou Shinichi chapter 9 . 7/3/2018
Props for writing Drusilla in such a way that I actually feel bad for her. That takes serious talent.
creativesm75 chapter 19 . 6/20/2018
cool
James Birdsong chapter 19 . 6/15/2018
Nice update. Good chapter.
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