Reading this story is like watching an accident and how much ever I try I can't seem to stop reading. I'm not liking it, but can't seem to stop.

Your style is utterly beautiful and disturbing, like a long lasting nightmare, say. I don't think I've ever read anything close to even resembling this.

There are so many things I want to point out and ask "the hell?"
But so far, the thing which troubles me the most is the fact that Sasuke is a sex addict. You might not have expressly said so, but that's the only impression I'm getting. Orochimaru and heck even Itachi I can maybe kinda understand. But Kakashi? Sakura? He wants to sleep with them without any clear reason. I don't think he's being fair to Naruto, or the others for that matter.

Oh god, I'm rambling right? I wouldn't write something so big if I hadn't actually liked the story, it's incredibly unique. I just wish there was some clarity in Sasuke's motives.

I think this is the most fucked up story ive ever read AND I LOVE IT

Poor Sasuke

LOL everyone wants to kiss Naruto

To me this could stand alone as an AU fic, a great happy ending to the otherwise dreadful alternative. I think it's very cute that Rick was a dumb kid working at fast food It's so cute. LOL Punk!Adrain... I can't imagine! I really can't imagine him with pink hair! *o*

And who is Mike? Couldn't figure that one out...

Yay! o Banzai! Rick x Adrian 4eva!

T_T...

I was reading this while at the hair salon and I almost cried in the public... and then the end happened too quickly... I always thought it would be a really dramatic ending, but I guess it didn't need to, because everything was dramatic for like 53 chapters that kinda made up for it... It was a simple ending that was more important because it was made simple. I knew they were gonna die in the end as I was reading it half way through.

Dying together is the most beautiful thing ever for NaruSasu. Hope this happens in the canon as well.

I MUST ABSOLUTELY REVIEW CHAPTER BECAUSE IT'S LIKE THE HOTTEST THING I'D EVER READ.
I really want to applaud you for Sakura's characterization. YAOI fans usually hate her for the worst reasons and you took her personality from the canon and made it real-AND. HOLY. SNAPZ. The 3some. I'm going crazy here, and a little disappointed it was... in more detail... (not because I'm a pervert, ok, jk, yes I am). Who took Sakura's virginity?! WHO ENTERED FIRST? OR TOGETHER? I have all these questions! Or was it INO? Does it count if they are lesbians? Isn't all girls' fantasy to do a gay guy-wait, TWO hot gay guys who are bfs at the same time!?

HOLY DAMN.

I really wish that there is a stand-alone cut scene for this chapter, because I'm raving here. AND. SO. She's gonna be pregnant huh? With Naruto or Sasuke's child, who knows!?

This is such a great fic! I've been of course reading your fic and I could have commented every chapter, but I had it downloaded on the go. Will give a proper review when I'm done completely.

BUT DANG THIS CHAPTER.

Just finished reading...

Aa, wow. This is single handedly THE greatest Naruto fic I've ever read. Great work, great writing, great job. Though if I think about it too much I'll cry. Also, nice job with the OCs. Usually they are prissy and perfect Mary Sue's and Gary Sue's but that wasn't the case in this one. WOOW! :D I'll treasure this fix forever.

Thanks for the story!

this is kind of... sick. I mean, uuugh. this is getting me mad. Like, its INCEST. duh, its sick. i thought incest kids turn out wrong. Sasuke is all lovely dovey to Kakashi, and Naruto still IS WITH HIM. Naruto, Sasuke and Kakashi are... disgusting. i cant stand and im still readin this.

Ahh. I think you've just ruined Naruto fanfiction for me. Sigh. Second time that's happened for me. You read something so good, the gem of them all, and then everything else just...sucks. Meh. Whatever. I can just keep on rereading this until I remember every writing technique used and your interpretation of the characters. Heh.

And I've never thought of Sarutobi in that way, wow (I have the feeling I'm going to overuse that word in the coming days and wow, won't that just be dull :D I should substitute it with something like...foodstuffs. Yes. That shall be it. Every time you see a random foodstuff, be warned that it is a slightly more glamorous version of 'wow'. And this was entirely too irrelevant, whoops, sorry c:). He's just always been the old man who...didn't know how to deal with Naruto and Orochimaru and- oh, asparagus, I see it now.

...ah. I. Have this problem...where I suck at seeing the underneath. Don't even try underneath the underneath. So. Um. Was that, uh, ItachiSasuke? (and yam, he is a bastard)

Also yay, I laughed. During your story. Which is all dark and swearword, but the words you used 'cosmic conspiracy of awesome proportions and cruelty'. Sorry. It just happened :D And. Well. I didn't really mean that sorry.

And I didn't think I could hate Orochimaru any more than I already did. Seeing his offer to Sasuke being parodied is fine and all and can conjure laughter, and knowing that Shonen Jump would never allow such atrocities is a nice safety, but then seeing the flipside of the comedy is just gross and repulsing, and even now, there is the safety net that this is fiction that I can fall back on when it becomes too much. I normally hate this kind of content, but you've written it so well and I just can't stop reading, damn it.

Mindblown, not really, but it sounds appropriate...so...Sasuke has consumed Orochimaru's consciousness and power?

The Kabuto perspective at the end was a nice touch.

You make me want to write :D

Again, thank you for writing this and not stopping.

-eclipsed flower (how long does it take you to write a chapter? It fascinates me. No. that sounds wrong. I mean- it’s bugging me…how do you do it?)

Wow. I really enjoyed (would that be the right word for something like this?) reading this and just wanted to let you know. I would love to give you an exceptionally long and in-depth review about your story, but I fear that anything I might write will be inadequate and pale in comparison to your beautifully written story. All my views on Naruto and its characters are equal to trashy fiction, so coughdon'texpectmuchcough :P

I've never seen anything quite like it and it makes me very happy to have stumbled upon something like this in well... /fanfiction/

Thank you for writing this. You've made my morning (and wow, that brackets technique that you employed' and random slips into first person were so...um...cool!) and *inappropriately rolling on the floor in delirious happiness* there are another 54 chapters! :3

I really didn't expect most of it and wow, it was a pleasant (or not so pleasant considering the darkness of it all) surprise :D

-eclipsed flower (I really should change that name, but that requires effort and I can't afford much of that considering my current state huddled under blankets reading your wonderful makesmewanttocryandrage writing)

Not halfway into the first chapter and I'm already severely depressed (I'm going to need tissues while reading this, aren't I?), and I had cheery electro pop playing in the background and everything.

This, is of course, not to say that I won't keep reading. Quite the opposite, in fact.

Youch. I don't even know what to say about this one. It's pretty incredible and I hope you're proud of yourself. I'm always impressed with people trying something a little different in their writing, and I think this is as different as it can get.

I liked all of the side characters. Kakashi, Temari, Neji, Ino, Hanabi. The prose took me a while to get on with, but I thought it worked for this style of writing.

The downhill slide of all the characters was pretty tragic, but believable and you saw it, even before it happened.

Some fics, for example Ripple Effect, give information, but don't tell the reader things. However in fics like that I often find myself at a loss. I'm sure I understood everything in this, even if I didn't get the first hints, I'd gathered it by the end.

The last chapter I enjoyed, actually. I've always liked the idea that Naruto and Sasuke are connected. As lovers, brothers, best friends, rivals and everything between, and that is what makes their relationship so special to me.

That's all! This story is so complex I could hardly write a review to do it justice. I hope you keep writing.

Why do I feel like everyone in this story are sluts?

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