| Reviews for Shadows Within the Light |
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   Ltheslytherin chapter 25 . 7/22 I didn‘t think Neville would be homophobic |
| Ltheslytherin chapter 9 . 7/19 The twins are 2 years older than Harry |
| fhl1234 chapter 51 . 5/31 In the prequel to this, Harry could communicate with his alters through a journel and I liked it, so perhaps they can communicate through the mirror. Really hope that that's what you chose. |
| fhl1234 chapter 49 . 5/31 Definitely hope you went with a. |
| fhl1234 chapter 48 . 5/31 I love Marissa, she's so cute. |
| fhl1234 chapter 45 . 5/31 I know that the fic is over, but I'm still going to vote, b and e. |
| fhl1234 chapter 39 . 5/30 He should definitely fall in love with Luna. Loving the story so far. |
| LianaRamsay chapter 30 . 5/8 I have loved the prequel to this story, and I am really enjoying this work, but I was definitely disappointed in this chapter. I was so frustrated that Shadow (and Severus and even Neville to an extent) gave in to Ginny. Her character seems very similar to how Ron's is/was - they keep repeating the same mistakes, apologizing, people forgive them, then they repeat the action again (it's a vicious cycle). On the other hand, I love how invested I am in the world you have written - where I am completely frustrated on Shadow's behalf about Ginny. I also don't understand why Ron and Hermione had to be told the secret. They have been honestly not great friends from the beginning (book 1) and they get told this monumental secret? It was very (and I get I have repeated this word multiple times already) frustrating. |
| DracosTaintedDreamer chapter 36 . 4/12 did he seriously just slap him?! I-im actually tearing up. |
| DracosTaintedDreamer chapter 35 . 4/12 ...sev lying. if he overhears their plans. why TF did he take so long to show up? boy lying. lie lie lie |
| DracosTaintedDreamer chapter 35 . 4/12 when the author said "Voldemort walked' I lost it. I was like come on now. we went through all that! and he still alive. everybody done died but he still alive |
| DracosTaintedDreamer chapter 34 . 4/12 awwSeph demanding Severus back makes my heart just ahhh |
| DracosTaintedDreamer chapter 25 . 4/12 aww. Draco with boy makes me cry my eyes out |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2019 "In a way…" Harry said slowly, his eyes sparkling playfully. "It's kinda like I'll become our child, were it possible for us to make children." "That is the most disturbing thing I've ever heard you say," Severus sneered. Oh my god the entire part since these two were alone in that room is so so hilarious and touching. I'm shaking with laughter. -jaron5 |
| ThorneAndRose chapter 41 . 5/28/2019 The ending of this chapter was amazing, leaving me both sad and relieved. |
