Nice way of ending the story arc. Very well done.

A very nice short piece. I like it. _ I do see one problem, though...Kurapika is surprised at the mention of the Genei Ryodan, but he's the first one to say it. Other than that, it's great!

I like the way you describe CUrarpikt and Senritsu pretty much

poor Neon... loosing not only her nen ability but also her shopping ability-

Your writing style is great, write more

this story is so great ,write more stories like this one