WHAT THE BLOODY HELL!?

This didn't say anything meaningful. You're being ridiculously pretentious.

what the... l'm not a weak minded girl!

i found it mean but yet hilarious!_~

Heh. Take the flames as a compliment. It means you wrote convincingly and they actually believed you felt that way.

As to your story, I think it needs a less-misleading title, something that reflects that there is intelligence to it. Secondly, I don't think you need to expand on the theme (like extra characters) but it would be helpful if we had some clue as to the narrator's angle (this obviously isn't the book Ella talking). What happened to the narrator that deluded her into thinking love isn't real?

Lastly, I think you're fairly gratuitous at times. For example, "the most horrible misleading piece of work in children's literature" is too exaggerated and generalized to be very effective as a statement. So are the blanket statements about love. The narrator's rage would be all the more intense if we knew why she was so angry, and what she was really angry at.

Still, you turn several memorable phrases.

This thing sucks. What kind of story is this?

Wow powerful, that was good in a way that looking at the other side is good! sorry im babbaling! but really i liked that, i really like how it was (whats it called?) third person narrative (i think)and ella was herself or whatever!

Good story

carly

Very, very funny.

This is hot stuff. It's really good, but it might be better if you told exactly what the REAL ella would have done, instead of how much she hates her portrayal. Loverly Job!

~knight.

Oh, feel free to post my pro link or whatever you do. God knows i need more publicity!

Wow, this was great! I too love the book, and I feel really sorry for all the people who thought you actually hated the book. This was an amazing take on who Ella could be. I loved it, top notch!

Hello. Greetings. Wow. I like the way you write. It's like ranting only very pretty... and there are ideas and they are organised in such a pretty way.

::clap clap clap::

-Me... who else?

Hey- if anyone reads this could you please review the hatehatehate...thing...and tell me what LOL means! I'm stuck!

I was going to yell at you until I saw your disclaimer at the end, so now all I have to say is... yes, it is very... unconventional. Needs a more descriptive title, though. And in agreement with a previous reviewer, you should describe what the real Ella is like... perhaps in another chapter?

Wow...this is amazing. You must have a lot of talent to write so strongly in the opposite direction of what you feel about a book. I'd love to see more of this, maybe explain the book through Ella's eyes showing what really did happen. Please ignore any flames, this is an incredible piece of writing.

Lol... wow. That was different. It's kind of depressing too. I like fluffy happy endings! I don't know exactly what to say in response to it. Very thought-provoking take on the Ella's thoughts.