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Monster Wars

Competition

Dreadloch

Do I get my fifty points?

first of all zilla never tried to steal godzillas name people just confused them and i for one would like it if people would stop blaming him

I'll go ahead and join the chorus of folks praising this story.

The writing got a little shaky at times, and the Zillas were a bit hard to follow at times since they all have the same name. The scenes with HEAT I also found a bit cringe-worthy, although that's mostly because I hated that cartoon, which isn't your fault. The overall quality of the battles and the descriptions of the scenes made up for this. I was able to clearly picture what was going on at all times, just as if this were a Godzilla film.

So all of that said, kudos to you for making an awesome and memorable Godzilla story.

Great story so far! I like the Gamera Cameo. I'd venture a guess that either Mothra, Anguirus, or Rodan will help him (maybe Jet Jaguar... :D). But since I have to choose one, I'll go with Mothra. It would be nice if Gamera was the one though.

have you not watched the godzilla series zilla jr was tougher than that

dude i like zilla just try to think of him as his own monster rather than a godzilla copy cat

You captured the epicness of the fight like the movie riddince to that tuna head.

make a sequel

yes

its awesome

rodan

Not going to lie... You got me with the death thing. I saw this on tvtropes and didn't click on it for a few months until it gradually intruded onto my mind... You are a wonderful author. I thought you were going for an ending with how the Heisei series ended until you said Godzilla's eyes opened. I applaud you and your story. When I realized what Godzilla was doing, I literally said, "Godzilla... No!"

I did, however, suspect that there'd be a cliff hanger with the Zilla eggs... It was kind of obvious that the ones that weren't near the fighting could have been off laying eggs.

This story is truly worth a Godzilla fan's time.

okay this is awesome. i like seeing the world through Godzilla's eye's.

your dialog is a little hard to read here but i like the story.

Very nice