im favoriting this

i really really liked this

*insert fangirl squeal* I loved every bit of this. It's one of the most beautiful pieces of fiction I've read on this site, and I think you did a really wonderful job writing in Neji's point of view. I really enjoyed it. :D

That was amazing. Best neji pov I have ever encountered I love the thing about how the mask is overused, and nonexistent, because I agree. This is an amazingly well written series, and I hope you continue to write

I really liked this, all of the one-shots and arcs. It's all deep. Over all, I really like your writing style and how you protray Neji. I think you've got him down really good. Since this is 2 years old and all, it might not matter much to you anymore, but I felt like reviewing. I never felt insulted throughout the whole thing, either, and I agree about the "mask" and how Neji would never say "I love you".

The weird thing is.. I found this last piece funny.

No, not in a humorous way, but.. in a strangely ironic way, because as far as I think, it accurately depicts how Neji really would act/feel/think if somebody ever said that.

And he's just adorable. :P

"I hated it. I was insulted." ?

Are you kidding me?

I am eating this stuff up!

It is pretty fickin delicious too xD

Okok...well I am really into the character depthness.

You can make Neji convey emotions in a way that is believeable.

It sounds so smart, so well-thought out, so self-controlled...

ah! I love it.

I can totally see him like this.

Too many time have I heard/read "melt through his heart of ice."

Uh...update?

Its mucho interesante!

-DaGirl

Hated it? No way. In fact, I think this piece is...wonderful. The entire essence of Neji's character is just...within it. I will say that I've a tendency to read mask stories... It's just that the overwhelming majority of all Neji/Tenten (even in a decent, comprehensible, realistic situation) is so cliche and 'mask' oriented...it's hard to find stuff like this.

I agree with your reviewers, you seem a lot older than under 20. That's not a bad thing, I think that's good when it comes to writing.

The angry Neji you wanted to know about? I like it. It makes him angry in a sense that is pure, raw emotion, the best kind. It's hard to really keep someone in character, and even though this piece is relatively short (there are one-shots 10,0 words long), you seem to have put a LOT of thought and feeling into it.

Your writing style, hard to find another like it!

Katako-Chan

Karma, wow. I didn't expect this chapter to have such an angsty feel. Karma...generally, isn't that angsty, let's just say.

I really like your writing style. I mean, I try to keep my writing on a level that shows maturity (no lemons or anything, not even a lime I don't think) and a good grasp of vocabulary, grammar, etc., but your writing seems to have more essence to it, I guess.

I think it has to do with the raw emotion, and how you capitalize the emotions.

The italics and bolds are fine, they actually help the piece.

Wonderful chapter! So sad though...

Katako-Chan

Wow, that was amazing. I didn't really like the stab at romantics, but the rest was brilliant. I believe that you have captured the essence of Neji's persona.

Katako-chan

Hmm...good start. I like it, though I AM midly disturbed by the Kakashi/Sakura (pediphile much?), I think I'll live with it, because, as you said, it's only for "plot cohesion".

I like it, and I like the way you show how basely human even Neji is, but not the most authors do (I'm not sure how to describe it).

Katako-Chan

This was really deep and in-depth character study of Neji. i like reading your works because it is always so deep. However, as I love Neji as much as you do, reading him being so angsty saddens me. It is realistic that he acts that way, no doubt about that. But I would also like to read how he feels contentment and joy being with the woman he loves and ignoring the rest of the world.

Oh, how I hope I can write as good as you. :D

Just a question, have you ever though of venturing into NejiTen fluff? Since your writing is very good, I'm sure it will not be the overly-fluff type (sadly, like the ones I write) but a sweet, realistic fluff.

Oh no..I think I said too much. Have a nice day! And I hope you'll still write more of our favourite couple.

Yeah you did a great telling neji's side without OOCness. I'm not that good with ideas. Desire,Loneliness, and happiness. I never seen those themes did a good job portraying emotions for a guy like neji who usually hides his feelings.

it was touching. i don't often hear things from neji's pov. You have a way with words.

I don't really see Neji in this piece. I see more of a Sasuke and Sakura. Neji, I feel, would never do be so... I don't know. It's just... hard to explain.