Gohan truly deserves better after all the BS that he's been through in the Moon Kingdom. Here's hoping him and Sasami finally hook up in the sequel in a satisfying way, and end on a good note.

I wanted herwith trunks grrr

It's amazing how quickly Serena became as unlikable as Cosmos. Rei had the right idea in bailing out when she did and for that, good on her. In the end, Serena got exactly what she wanted, but at the tragedy of a friend that she could've easily prevented if she had the least bit common sense. It probably wouldn't have made a difference given the events with Beryl, but at least I would've seen Serena in a much better light.

That said, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

Oh... my... God... Seriously Gohan? You have no idea what SEX is?! ... Just give him a book about it and leave it at that.

- TheAnimeWriterLover

Nice, a fairly deep and complex story, complete with character flaws - which is something of a rarity in many fanfics.

Do keep up the good work.

Frieza's power level was only like 80,0 when Goku beat him. 55,0 is ghastly powerful at this scope! The average 3rd class saiyan like Raditz had a power level of like 1,500. Vegeta was like 10k something... If I remember correctly...

In this fic whats Goku's power level? As he's obviously the most powerful character so far in this fic.

below is my review...

i try to use the account for any -ve reviews i write...

forgot for this one...

good writing skills...

but lame plot design skills...

and a very unnecessary twist in the end...

thought i could read the first half of the story for its character development...it went south from there on...i could only skim through chapters 10 and later...expecting it to probably get better...but it never did...

the characters from second half werent very consistent with that in first half...seemed to be behaving in order to facilitate your pre-designed plot...

...a shame really...i had good expectations after first few chapters...

and btw...your knowledge in DBZ universe looks pretty weak...or you changed it too much..

Really like the way you delve into character and make these seemingly simple characters more complex. Great job!

I don't usually give feedback on fanfics, but I feel that this story was good enough to warrant it. After searching the net for a good Sailor Moon/ Dragonball Z crossover, out of all the stories I found and read, I'd have to say with out a doubt this story was the best. You even managed to find a way to throw in a bit of Techni Muyo/Universe, which was just an added bonus.

The plot was excellent, and the storytelling, and the psychology that you used to tell the story was top notch. The ending was great, the story ends in tragedy, yes, but you clearly have it set up for a sequel, which has me intrigued.

The thing that I liked most about the story, was that it truly was different, one that required an open mind. You rewrote the history of both Sailor Moon and Dragonball Z and merged them, yet you still managed to keep the integrity of both shows, but the integrity of the main characters as well, that takes talent.

Another thing that I enjoyed is that you built up both universes to be credible forces. You built up both Serena and Gohan to be incredibly powerful without having to downgrade either show. Most crossovers that I read between SM and DBZ, one show usually takes priority over the other, and it becomes clear that the authors writing those fics don't know much about both shows, but it is clear to me that you do know quite a bit about both shows and you were able to do the main characters of both shows justice.

I also liked the fact that you kept your use of Goku to a minimum. That, and the story really did revolve around Gohan and Serena, like advertised, you never got off track on some other storyline.

The ending with Sasami intrigues me, the way you described it in your story, Sasami seems to be a more suitable soulmate to Gohan than Videl. I've never seen someone write a story with Sasami being overtaken by evil, and since Sasami is depicted as being innocent, sweet, and caring in Tenchi Universe, a vengeful, hateful, angry side of her would be interesting to see.

Keep up the good work, and if you do decide to write a sequel, I will most certainly read it.

I don't think I've ever read a fan-fic this good! You're dedication to your work proves that you are a wonderful writer. Keep up the amazing work! I look forward to reading more of your stories!

I have to say, I was really impressed with this whole story overall. It is much different compared to all of the rest in this section of the site and much more original. The marriage betrothel and the melding of the two universes together in that they are in the same universe. But truth be told, I have never EVER liked Darian at ALL! He's one of those pretty boy types that think the world and the most beautiful girls in the world, or universe in this case, is theirs. That is the kind of character I hate the most. I have though, ALWAYS liked and respected Gohan's virtuous character. He's just the most likable good guy, albeit a bit naive, on the show. And in my personal belief, I think Darian should be punished in some way for his hand in Gohan's fall. Overall though, I enjoyed it immensely and can't wait for the sequal.

Nice. You are really good at all this drama. I can't wait for the sequel.

Two years on a fic is a long time. At least I can say you were very dedicated.

As for this final chapter, I thought it was very well thought out. You showed one by one how the outcome of this horrible event affected everyone's lives - everyone that was connected with Gohan somehow. However bittersweet it might seem, it was really nice and pleasant I guess to have as close to a ending as possible. At the same time, the open-ended feelings and emotions that are running amock among the characters leaves great room for a sequel. There's really a lot to resolve just from this one chapter alone that could make a whole 'nother 20-30 chapters worth of a story. I really commend you on taking something that most people would take to the ends of the world and back and actually making it more down-to-earth and graspable for readers to really see a true story out of this.

I would have to say that I am not disappointed to have stumbled on this story (all of a sudden when I had no idea that there was a section for DBZ/Sailormoon, let alone X-overs in general). It was enjoyable to read and to even wait to see if you'll continue on with the sequel anytime soon if at all. It's understandable when you want to take a break from a 2-year project and perhaps refresh your mind and try something different for awhile.

Well then, a very great story indeed...until whenever that time should be...

-Pchu

Absolutely beautiful. It was very good. Please write the sequel soon.