yeah! I agree completely to this! thank you so much for making this! why did they have to suffer and no one seemed to care! damn it! D anyways great story. great now I think I got somethin in my eye, no! I am not crying! just feeling angsty...damn..XD

Classic Riku. 3

I liked this :) I've always wondered the same things about Roxas and Sora, but I think that why people like to keep them clearly separate is because it's more interesting that way. Roxas and Sora are both well loved personalities but their combo would be...? I guess I just don't want to see watered down version of their characters, some sort of boring compromise.

Wow. That was gorgeous. Absolutely. I was always kind of wondering about that. I am currently playing COM and the way Sora just sweeps straight through much of the Orgy is kinda disheartening when you really think about it. Worse in II because then it's Dem and everyone knows he didn't want to fight (although why I'm not sure considering his bloody time trials and clone attacks murderized me many times before I got through. I swear - I still shudder every time I hear DANCE WATER, DANCE!) but it's tricky in any case. I always have loved stories that go into the darkness that Sora must have gained through his travels. I mean the role of saviour is a wonderful responsability and priviledge - but also a heavy burdan and it kinda seems like it would chip away a little at one's own soul for every person he had to destroy in the persuit of the greater good. Tricky indeed. Poor Sora. I almost feel that in some cases Riku would have come out ahead in the sanity department considering that although the things he did were rather less than steller - betrayal of friends, his world, his own soul - but at least he got to confront his own darkness and actively oppose it. He recognized that he was not completely of the light and he used his inner darkness to help the saviour of worlds before actively choosing the light over his own powerful darkness. IT's all out in the open. Sora however would have had so many traumatizing moments through his travels. Combine that with the stress of being the only hope for all the worlds, having people trying to kill you at every turn, being forced to take life just because of what someone or something *was* by definition. He could never even really show his own insecurities or weaknesses because he has to be strong for everyone else. Not to even go into detail on the fact that he had to leave his best friend in the realm of Darkness that first time. I mean it would really wear on one's soul I would think. It really doesn't bode well for his long term sanity in any case.

Oh my God. That was so epic.

I cried when Sora/Roxas started crying.

I'd been thinking about that too, about how Sora just killed them like it was practically nothing. Every time I play the last level and Xemnas asks them why they despise the Organization members for what they are...I agree. They didn't really have a choice.

I loved this story. It was wonderful. :3

~IcyInuYoukai

I never really thought about it before, but I totally agree with you. It is kinda sad how he heartlessly killed them all when they just wanted to be whole...

I liked this story a lot, and your view on the Sora-Roxas... thing lol. It makes sense.

~Riku

This was amazing! I totally see Roxas and Sora the same way, It's so hard to find fics like this that portray them as the same person. I love the relationship between them and Riku and how you describe the organization. I truly love this! It gave me chills!

Hurt/comfort/angst are some of my favorite genres for some reason. This was really good. It's exactly the kind of thing I like to read. ] Riku is such a jerk. haha - Pushing poor Sora/Roxas into the water.

The way Sora/Roxas was talking was kind of creepy, and it was really well-written I think. It seemed like a third personality was there in his body. It left me kind of puzzled as to who was speaking when. But that isn't a bad thing.

I had never thought of the Organization that way before. I liked how you chose Riku's POV, too. He was a good choice becasue it's like the reader is interviewing Sora-er, Roxas-no Sora! Oh, you get the picture...

Great fic!

ZeldaStrife

Wow this was a very good fic! I adore the writing style you use for this story! I wish I was able to write like that!

But anyways, I hope you write more fics soon!

Compared to your other story, it really contrasts. But never the less, a great story full of hope. _

I really love this story. Every time I read it, I like it more. The idea that the Nobodies wanted to be something more is one that most never contemplate. I would love to see more stories centered on the same idea. Keep up the good work. :)

~Silver

That was so sad and yet kinda... cute?

I dunno. But me likies very much!

*bliss*

I think this story is really good as it is! -shakes fist- Damn Sora for killing the Organization! The narration from Riku's POV is written very well, so I tell you; great job!