Thanks for the story!

I really enjoyed reading this point of view on the events of the movie. I found Thunder likeable and interesting, and I thought your story was a well-written read.

So beautiful, and yet so incredibly sad. I loved it. Well done.

That was so beautiful...Great, great job! It was birlliant! I really felt so sorry for him...great job. :)

Angelica

That was so beautiful.

very nice, lovely look at Gwen from a different pov than usual.

Very nice. Are you going to write a companion piece, from her side of the story?

that was so wonderful! you should make a sequel to this to see if he does anything about his feelings, or if he meets someone new (hint hint).you should also include his career as a hero! great story and character! :)

Jeeze, dude. I go away for... Two months, maybe, and find GOOD FICTION?

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You ruined the whole stereotype of Sky High having bad fiction! LIEKOMGLOLIHATESJ00!

But that's ok. I still love it.

That was really great! It is a very original plot and it was well written. I also liked how the whole story was told from the characters point of view, like an "outside looking in" thing. The character was also very well made.

Something different! And very well done, as well. You write well - its descriptive but easy to read. The only problem I had is I thought sometimes you put the lines under a paragraph too quickly - it's not really effective if you've only got one line and then a new section, for example.

But other than that, fantastic work!

Tigger101

Oh, my goodness. That was one of the most beautiful, well-put together stories I've read thus far. Not many people can create GwenOCs like you have. Your style is very professional and mature. The reflection thing was a little cliche, but aside from that, everything was just about perfect. Favorited. Nice work.

~*t.I.G.R.e.S.S.

Pretty cool, dude!

~thestinger

FINALLY! AN OC WHO IS A REAL CHARACTER! Sorry for the caps, but god alone knows how many stories in this section are actually worth reading. Stumbling across something like this is like finding treasure in the dump. I like this story, although I think Warren is a bit older than the others, I could also be wrong (might be fannon fact). Other than that small error, this was fantastic. Good flow, beautiful characterization and a neat little capturing of Gwen's character. The nature of love is too powerful to let little things like morals get in the way, it speaks about the dual nature of attraction, the dark side of love that is so rarely examined in stories. Kudos to yudos!

dam that was good nice work also are u going to still creat We're Not In Kansas Anymore 2 i relly enjoyed that well any way that was relly good never read a sky high storie like that nice work dude