Insert a line to fix the spacing. It’s not rocket science. Little kids can do it. Click on the line icon when you edit in the tool, and it’ll insert a line. You have to be smarter than your computer monitor.

Update please!

This is really good please add more chapters please

Please please update soon

Why are all abused Harry stories horribly written?

FYI: ‘here’ is not the same word as ‘hear’. ‘Your’ and ‘you’re’ are different words, each with different meanings as well.

OOOOOOOOHHHHH GOSH! CLIFFY!

YAAAAAAAASSSSSSSS! DRARRY! DRARRY 4 LIFE PEOPLE!

I already reviewed chapter 19 and 20 and I forgot to mention this. I thought they were going to homeschool Harry instead of making him a first year. And, it's always the defense teacher.

Aw, poor Harry.

I am sad that Harry is bonded to Draco. I wished he could have been a little boy longer. I loved the Harry and Snape snuggles. The tone of this chapter is dramatically different from the previous one. I assume that you wrote this after coming back from a break in writing.

I really am surprised that you have both Lily and Petunia as Albus' daughters considering how dreadful Petunia has treated Harry. I thought you would have it as Lily being adopted by muggles. I really hope that Dudley doesn't show up at Hogwarts now. I just read a dreadful fic where Harry's accidental magic makes Dudley a wizard and Dudley continues to bully and abuse Harry at Hogwarts. It was so injust, I simply could not stomach to finish it. I hope that doesn't happen here.

There seems to be a repeat of a section when Severus asks Lucius to request a Barghest and Harry asks what that is. He asks twice and while that's a possibility as Severus answers twice but the dialogue that follows is slightly different. This is the second this type of repeat of section has happened. A few chapters ago it was a similar instance when Harry asked a question twice.

Wow. It's just incident after incident for Harry. Is he ever going to get a rest?

i know someone who would really have appreciated a warning because they don't like slash, and i agree that there should at least be a warning but she is also not a fan of any sort of gay pairing. anyway she asked me to write this but i'm sure this is a great story. :)

Love it please update your story I want to know how it ends.