What should have happened when Harris refused to be king

Judgemaster: you refuse, but your Racemasters history will know you as the greatest of all legands.

Harris: Thats exactly why we're unfit. Ivalice should not be run by legends but by people.

Only one song is suitable for this chapter (starting at the wedding scene)"My Hands" by Leona Lewis

The best song for this battle was "Born Anew" from Final Fantasy 13.

You should ahve put in more bad guys in this interlude.

Your OC's are really diverse and colorful. Good work

Roxas theme from 358/2 days is the perfectsong for this chapter.

When will there nightmare end. On a side note why is the bad guy called the black king when only wheres red.

Harrison I have but two Question: Are you gonna make a sequel? If so may I be in it?

ha ha ha oh my ha ha ha oh my ha ha ha funny ha ha hah!

I can think of something stronger than a racemaster: A true racemaster one who knows all abilities for all races!

This story, by far, surpasses anything i have ever read; A perfect blend of action, adventure, and romance. I comend you for such great accomplishment and thank you for such great entertainment.

great story. It's been a very interesting read, definitely going on my fav's list.

Yours Truly,

Ithio

I would so do training with kate.

Wow... I loved it... And just in case you havent found out yet... Acid gives your apponent a random status effect '.'

omfg i cant belive its over thank you so much for writing this probably the best ive ever read. 20 of 10. im writing an ffta fanfic too inspired by this story plz check it out. its final fantasy The darkness of Love. again thank you for writing such a beautiful story

Wow... I can;t believe its doen... Honestly, this was the best story i've ever read that wasn't pirnted out into a book in paper back. 10/10. I hope to see alot more stories like tis! Honestly, you're the best writer i've ever seen on fan fic. net since i became a writer here!