| Reviews for Avatar |
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   SuperMom1 chapter 1 . 3/13/2019 wow! I loved this story, Pesky Asurans and nanites, excellent Shepwhump what's not to love. Well written. |
| Vadercat chapter 13 . 2/11/2019 Great story! An AI that's bigoted, her creator was definitely a work of art. Could you imagine what she'd have been like if he had managed to slip her into Earth. Apart from the Ancients wanting to slit his throat for such a vile, corrupt and heinous program. Just another view of "human" Ancients. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 4/2/2018 Loved this story! Thank you for keeping my favorite characters alive |
| Whumplove chapter 13 . 6/10/2017 Love this story! |
| sheppardlover928 chapter 13 . 5/27/2013 Wow! Shepwhumpfest! Poor John! He sure got raked over the coals! This one going in my faves! |
| Peridot5 chapter 11 . 7/30/2012 Well, that was really awesome. Heckuva story. Carus was such an excellent villain. Plenty of the requisite arrogance and general disdain for humanity a good SG villain needs. She'd just about put a Goa'uld to shame on those grounds (though they wun on fashion hands down). And you had plenty of good humor in there. I loved the ending too. So cool. I'm still smiling. |
| SGAmvmm chapter 13 . 4/2/2012 Thank you for this.. John really got whump in here.. love how it works out in the end.. |
| Aguirre chapter 13 . 5/4/2011 Wonderful story, I really enjoyed every moment of this. Thank you for writing, you're a very talented team :) |
| Space1Traveler chapter 13 . 1/29/2009 Scary! Whew! But whumpilicious! Thanks. |
| godsdaughter77 chapter 13 . 6/20/2008 I know you wrote this awhile back, but I just read it and I wanted to say I really enjoyed it. I enjoyed all the Sheppard whump and I liked how at the end it took some time for Sheppard to get used to sudden movement from people around him. Great story. Thanks for writing it. |
| sakurablue13 chapter 13 . 2/23/2008 excellent job the way you played with word was just pure brilliant |
| ditraveler chapter 13 . 4/13/2007 This was AwesomeI loved it! and hold you responsible for my sleepless night since now I will only get 1 hour of sleep befoe I have to go. Great story! nice change from natives running after SGA-1 which is starting to get old to me, stories in the city are my favorite, and so are sheppard fighting back even when injure, I love whumping but I like my whumpee not to be too helpless all the time, c'mon Shep is a fighter and will fight till the end yet he is human and I loved how you dealt with it. Great Job! |
| Bonanzababe chapter 13 . 3/3/2007 Brilliant! 22 carrot cake to all those hardworking bunnies! I was hooked from the first to the last whump! You sure found some intriguing ways to hurt with enough attacks to keep an army of Becketts working. Thank you for a wonderful read and I look forward to future masterpieces! |
| skeeterses chapter 4 . 2/2/2007 “ Carson! Sheep in trouble, sheep in trouble!” So funny! This is a very intriguing story, what with everyone being taken over. And the whump of course ) |
| reen212000 chapter 11 . 1/29/2007 OMG! The Emergency! reference is hilarious. Love this story. |
