| Reviews for The Sum of Us |
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   srhittson chapter 7 . 1/13/2011 It's a good story but bad ending. Could have used more detail. |
| angeliena chapter 6 . 2/21/2009 Power Woman! |
| tochelle chapter 1 . 2/20/2009 great work! |
| ToothFairy chapter 6 . 2/20/2009 I really enjoyed this chapter. The scene at the gun range, in particular, was awesome. :) Nice to have you back! |
| erica1531 chapter 5 . 1/28/2009 This was a really fun chapter. I loved the cooking lesson (way too cute, but also realistic), and it was nice to see Michelle meet Tony’s family. Also nice to get the reveal to Chappelle out of the way. Tony’s decision to just tell Chappelle on his own made sense, and so did Michelle’s anger over it. A little healthy dissent is a good thing! Great work! |
| Jurojin chapter 5 . 1/21/2009 Good chapter. One small nitpick though. Tony's full name is Anthony. |
| AgentHumen chapter 5 . 1/20/2009 i like this story keep writing i want to see where it goes! |
| Realynn8 chapter 4 . 8/22/2008 This was really great, I hope you will update soon. All 4 chapters are amazing and I had some great laughs. :) Nice work. |
| bookworm03 chapter 4 . 10/14/2007 You're back! Lol! I really enjoyed this chapter. I thought it had a nice balance between CTU and non-work related stuff. Meeting the family is ALWAYS fun...especially when you've got someone like Danny to keep things interesting. It actually seemed like a pretty realistic first meeting though in the sense that it was awkward, but not too over the top. The dialogue was well done. Nice work. |
| angeliena chapter 4 . 10/10/2007 Oh I love it! there comment are so funny! I hope you will write more! |
| MichelleBA chapter 4 . 10/7/2007 Uh oh, that coulda gone better lol, I could see Danny being that protective, can't wait to read more! |
| MichelleBA chapter 3 . 10/7/2007 Great chapter! |
| MichelleBA chapter 2 . 10/6/2007 LOL, funny, good chapter! Can't wait to read more! |
| MichelleBA chapter 1 . 10/6/2007 Great chapter! I love the playful sarcasm back and forth. and this might sound a little weird but I also like your use of vocabulary. Everybody seemed perfectly in-character in terms of what they said and felt, loved it! |
| Joe's girl chapter 4 . 10/5/2007 Not at all what I expected, but a good chapter nonetheless. I fully expected some kind of major terrorist threat coming out of Indonesia. I need to stop second guessing you and just enjoy the story! It's been so long since I saw season 2 that I forgot that it was Tony who removed Danny's hands from Carrie's neck (although if Danny had killed her, not a jury in the land would have convicted him!). I can just imagine how happy Danny was to see Tony. His "sleeping with the boss" comment was both in character and uncalled for. I'm glad Tony didn't get upset but simply challenged him on it. All in all an enjoyable chapter! Keep it going. |
