| Reviews for The Not So Great Masterplan |
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socialgirl378 chapter 1 . 9/16/2014 Nice one Rukia! Sorry Ichigo, it looks like luck 's not on your side. So funny when it backfired! |
An Ordinary Riceball chapter 1 . 6/23/2013 HAHAHA! Good one ;D |
SparklyColours chapter 1 . 5/19/2010 good and funny :) |
ChocolateOranges chapter 1 . 3/29/2007 Eh, it was okay. I loved the fact that Rukia that prank on him instead though XD I thought Rukia would surely fall for that one. But hey, SHE IS smarter XD Good fic ! |
Alaena Night chapter 1 . 2/24/2007 Aww! Simple but very cute. Poor Ichigo. This makes me think of the Trix rabbit or Tom from Tom and Jerry...the guys who're always losing. Ichigo needs hugs. And a better plan. *evil laugh* Nice work with this story! -Alaena |
dragninja chapter 1 . 1/12/2007 it was okay, but you could've added more detail. creative, though. the originality is great. ;) lol, i loved your disclaimer! |
Paraluman chapter 1 . 1/11/2007 Not too bad but not too good either... try adding a few chapters. I wonder how ichigo's drawings look like though... hehehe_ |
Kosmic chapter 1 . 1/11/2007 Good - It was unexpected and some what funny Bad - Could have been a bit more descripted and for myself I was hoping she would fall in. Reason why she should have fallen in is becuase you could have mentioned she had a white shirt and once it got wet you could see through making Rukia more embrased. In another opionen make a sequel where Inchigo actualy gets her back. |
Agent HUNK chapter 1 . 1/11/2007 Lol! That was good for a first time. I liked it. A sequal or another chapter would be nice... In fact, you should just keep adding chapters about failed pranks. That'd be good! |