Reviews for The Not So Great Masterplan
socialgirl378 chapter 1 . 9/16/2014
Nice one Rukia! Sorry Ichigo, it looks like luck 's not on your side. So funny when it backfired!
An Ordinary Riceball chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
HAHAHA! Good one ;D
SparklyColours chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
good and funny :)
ChocolateOranges chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
Eh, it was okay. I loved the fact that Rukia that prank on him instead though XD I thought Rukia would surely fall for that one. But hey, SHE IS smarter XD

Good fic !
Alaena Night chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
Aww! Simple but very cute. Poor Ichigo. This makes me think of the Trix rabbit or Tom from Tom and Jerry...the guys who're always losing. Ichigo needs hugs. And a better plan. *evil laugh*

Nice work with this story!

-Alaena
dragninja chapter 1 . 1/12/2007
it was okay, but you could've added more detail. creative, though. the originality is great. ;)

lol, i loved your disclaimer!
Paraluman chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
Not too bad but not too good either... try adding a few chapters. I wonder how ichigo's drawings look like though... hehehe_
Kosmic chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
Good - It was unexpected and some what funny

Bad - Could have been a bit more descripted and for myself I was hoping she would fall in.

Reason why she should have fallen in is becuase you could have mentioned she had a white shirt and once it got wet you could see through making Rukia more embrased.

In another opionen make a sequel where Inchigo actualy gets her back.
Agent HUNK chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
Lol! That was good for a first time. I liked it. A sequal or another chapter would be nice... In fact, you should just keep adding chapters about failed pranks. That'd be good!