Well, I'm a huge Becky/Jesse fan, so I really enjoyed this. I really like the way you tied in the different episodes and events that happened. This is a well suited plot for a longer story, especially how you introduced Maria, but you wrote it into a nice one-shot. I got a little lost at some points, as it moved quickly, but most everything fit together nicely. I had a similar idea to write a story in which Jesse and Becky went through with their marriage, so I thought it was cool that you did, too. Anyways, great job!