There were some parts that I disagreed with concerning Remus' nature, but overall I enjoyed it!

It was so cute. I especially enjoyed how you used slang that fit with the setting (swot, bairn, ect.); it really put the reader into place. Great Job!

That was really neat!

very good. i love stories about remus.

This is imaginative and well done.

Ooh, very nice. You captured the spirit of the Marauders at an early age without overdoing their personalities like so many authors do. I loved how you wrote Remus' anxiety leading up to the full moon, and his inner-wolf's intruding thoughts were a nice touch. Thanks for writing this, it's going on my favorites list.

This was a very sweet story...I hope that there will be more in the future.

Amazing! I think it was very well written and the characters seemed like they were in character for that age! I loved it, if I had to pick one reason, because it felt like something right out of their lives. Thank you for writing it!

Lovely story. I adore your young Remus trying to deal with all his insecurities and fears. That first moon would have been the hardest, wouldn't it? I also love how quickly Sirius picks up on the fact that Remus is cursed. He would be the one with the experience of curses.

No! It can't be complete! please? /sniffles/ That was just to bloody good to not follow up on! Well, I think you got the idea I absolutely adore your story... I'm actually not much of one for most maurader stuff, but you have an insight into characters, especially Black and Lupin. Off to check your profile