Update it's been WAY TO LONG SINCE WE HAVE HAD AN UPDATE SO UPDATE IT NOW!
UPDATE SOON!

This is an amazing story so pretty pretty pleeaaasseeeeee if you can find a way to finish this story! It's a really great original idea

Its a great story so if your out there try to find the time to finish it.

*whine*hmmm~! *shuffle*

I would be very sad if this story stopped here. It's too young and pretty to die!

Hey sweetie; I am DYING to know what's going to happen here. :D

It's not very often you get a original idea that's well written to boot on !

Axel's confusion and symbiosis with his Heartless (as well as the yin/yang male/female theory of their co-existence) is amazingly described. :'D I am truely in awe of your work, not to mention completely enamoured of it.

But really, not an update for two years?

If I have to wait another two years to find out about the crashed Gummi Ship and Axel's further attempts to find Sora and retrieve Roxas I think I'll go quite mad.

It's a pity you haven't updated this for a while; it's good. I like how you made Axel not quite good and not quite evil. ANd rather confused about his whole bond with Roxas thing.

Hope you'll finish or update this someday; I'll be reading it x) I think even if I'm 25 I'd read it. xD

Good job and good luck.

update already... story getting good

This is really good. It's a really original idea and it sorta feels like it could be an actual Kingdom Hearts game. I think it's because you put a lot of effort into the Disney side of things, instead of just hurtling through each world with hardly any description.

I can't wait for more!

I love Soldier - and the Heartless/feminine Nobodies/masculine concept is fascinating.

Is the bond between Axel and Soldier getting stronger?

It seems like she can wander off longer/more frequently than before without forgetting.

Maybe Axel's heart problem will solve itself if that keeps up.

So much love for this story~

I found it by accident and am completely in love with it.

Question though, if Soldier has to "eat" and when she "eats" hearts, those people turn into Heartless, how are she and Axel not creating a situation like KHI?

Also...not to be that annoying reviewer but..Pplease update if you get a chance. The story is awesome possum.

Oh, I'm falling in love with Soldier, she's so cute. x3 I think some fanart is in order.

And who is this Nox character? The plot thickens!

I must admit, I don't remember Mech. from Aladdin either. Oh! I love the Axel-Genie interaction, I could actually picture them acting it out this way. I wonder what Genie's reaction to Soldier would be? Will he, like Godmother and Merlin, be able to tell that She's Axel's other half? The mind reading machine sounds painful, needles in hair? Major ouch.

Waiting for the next update...

-Tanuki

-cougsnort- Lord Mexico, it has a nice ring to it.

Oh! Oh! Merlin's associate is Fairy Godmother, right?

-Tanuki

It isn't a party without chips. Cheesy ones.

x3 I love Axel's character in this first chapter. I don't think I've ever read a story like this, Heartless meet Nobody, it's already caught my attention. Axel's in Hallow Bastion, I fear for his safety D: he doesn't have the best reputation amongst Sora's allies, they weren't there to see him save the Boy Wonder. I can't wait to see which direction this'll go in.

-Tanuki

this is very well-written and i really enjoy the original plot! i love axel and soldier :)

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