Really enjoyed this! 3

AMAZING

hot. i liked it.

Please please please don't use the term "yuri" for something that isn't remotely Japanese.

Although i really like this story...The pairing i'm a bit iffy about. and before anyone bashes me for 'flaming' i'm not i'm a femslash writter i'm also bisexual i'm very open minded but i honestly can't see this pairing working out in anyway shape or form. and I know you guys are going to be like "thats why its written on retard!" but i now that. I'm just giving an honest oppinion. so bash me if you want i dont care

Oh HELLO.

Thank you dearie.

Thank you VERY much.

Terrible? That was anything but that. For your first M rated story i enjoyed to read it. :d

Glad I stumbled across this piece. :3

Have I mentioned how much I /love/ this fic? This is wonderful. Beautifully done. Great job. Gelphie is my oxygen. They are SO friggin' cute together lol.

Oh. My. God. This is seriously one of my favorite oneshot Gelphie smuts ever. If not my favorite altogether. Uh-mazingg.

Baby, I had NO IDEA you were the one who wrote this. This is one of my all-time favorites.

I can't tell you how absolutely erotic this fic is.

I love you, Elphaba.

Your FIRST M-rated story? Wow! It was amazing! Totally, totally wonderful.

It wasn't terrible at all, it was wonderful actually.

it was good i love gelphie smut so... hehe

o I need a cold shower now. Holy hell. -Stops rambling enough to get a few good words in- Great fic, I must say. The mere style of the writing was enough to fascinate me, but the description and emotion that accompanied it was incredible as well. I give it a 6 out of 5 stars.

FMKO

3 that was great! _