Sometimes, vanquishing evil is what makes a hero a hero. A very powerful and well-written yet brief one-shot. Well done. I particularly liked the section with Monty. Favorited.

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Hmmm, very profound

Nice reversal of the usual. Don't mess with KP. Good dialog as well.

one word: awesome.

Now... nobody will want to mess with Team Possible.

What an excitingly disturbing story. I can only imagine how much further Ron would have gone had Kim been killed as opposed to merely hurt.

Perhaps the wrong-doers of the world will know better than to underestimate someone like him.

"you have no idea the bon-diggety abilities I now have."

Great one shot, loved that line in particular.

Ron smites Kim's enemies. Very good story.

Bubba

'beware of those who you consider to pose no threat, they may conceal depths unexplored by even their own emotions.'

How VERY True. ; A Bloody GREAT Read.

MK2

great story, i enjoyed reading it.

Good story. Very nice and tight. I wish you would've included the battle, but it wasn't really necessary I guess. Well done.

I'm always impressed by those stories that take a familiar convention and turn it on its head. Here you did exactly that. Remind me not to piss off Ron.

I love it when our heroes go dark. This was no exception. What's really creepy is what Ron says when he finishes his "meditations," as though that were an appropriate word to describe killing the world's major supervillains with the PDVI. He still has the "childlike wonder" quality to him, but here it's almost like a horror movie where a person who is not yet a complete adult is going around killing people. Will all the power go to his head? Will he become a monster that not even Kim can love? That would make a great sequel.

Great story, man. This one's going on my favorites.

You allowed us to watch as Ron discovers the way of the warrior, that shadowy, treacherous path between good and evil. I shudder to think what would have happened had he lost Kim. When she wakes up I hope she understands. He has sacrificed his innocense for her. A well crafted story.

I would like to see this one expanded and expounded in depth. The fight, the epiphaney, the resurrection, and the decision. It would make for a great 3-4 chapters. Oh, well, this was enjoyable and thought provoking as always. Thanks

Pushing Ron too far by hurting Kim is perhaps the worst thing to do if you have any intentions of living. Good one-shot.

I always worry about "Final Confrontation" scenes. Espicially those involving the MMP. You wonder if Ron will somehow lose his humanity and/or essential Ronness. But this one worked.