A really interesting plot idea. Honestly? Interesting enough for me to overlook the repetitive grammatical mistakes with, for example, never-ending confusion of 'your' vs. 'you're', 'its' vs. 'it's' etc...
The manner the characters are speaking suggests that you wrote it being rather young, am I right? ;)
Nevertheless, thank you for the fun reading piece! :)

Absolutely adore the story!

This is a really stupid premise, bending all logic and hanging the entire story. I don't by it, but I'm in it for the relationship, so I'll keep reading if that part stays hot.

Wow keep up the good work

(Sneer) Personally l don't know how anyone could face
such an ugly ginger troll like yourself, weasel, let alone sitting at the same table as you, day in , day out...

I don't know if you still read these reviews, but I liked this story (and the sequel) a LOT more than I thought I would when I first started reading. I wanted a little more closure at the very very end... Not the pairing, maybe Harry and the smug order reactions to the aber-veritaserum validation...

wickedlysweetsilence

great! will definately be reading the sequel!

harry was also considered for slytherin first...

I really enjoyed this story and the sequel. Thank you very much.

I have to say I really enjoyed this story. I don't know why it doesn't have more reviews but it isn't because it isn't brilliant because it is. I really like your take on the order and I really like Hermione in this story. The slow burn with Severus was especially good. I cannot wait to start the sequel and I hope to see more of your work in the future. Cheers :)

Is this a Ron Hermione romance or Hermione snape?

I thoroughly enjoyed that. :)

Nice end! I'm more than eager to read the sequel!

Those gits...

Sweet! ;-)