I LOVE IT, KEEP WRITING PLZ. I LOVE HARU/KYO "UKE KYO POWER"

I like it so far!

Ok, so it's been like two years, but I'm still praying that you will finish this! It's so amazing and I can't wait to read more. Pretty, pretty please?

::drools::

OMG i am speechless... you are amazing... ;)

i think i love you...

Eheh. Exactly what i was talking about before. Things a fangirl wouldn't know. Much as i love your smuty scenes, still... saliva works yeah, but you need lots and lots of it. I feels bad for Haru. Seriously. Fucking. Painful.

It gets better but the first few minutes a re a real kicker. Good analogy about the train earlier. Really sums it up nicely.

Yuki the voyeur! Ahh, thats a classic. I love it! Still, theres a difference between pulling off a nonchalant attitude spur of the moment and actually inviting someone to watch. It ain't a spectator sport. Yuki's just a closet perv, thats all.

Technical advice!

If you're switching back and forth between focus on different people, try adding some kind of divider so people don't get confused with whats going on where with who, y'know?

Poor Kyo doesn't even know that Yuki got a hardon listening to him. I liked Haru here though. Thats something i would do...

Mmm... alot less angsty then the other story i mentioned. Still, once i finish reading this, you better be ready cause im'ma dump a box of plot bunnies on your head and let them eat your brain until you have no choice but to write more. We need to get creative. We need to think outside the box. Actually, we need to think inside the box because thats where the plot bunnies stay. I've already got an idea for that... Heh~

I'm very sorry to have to tell you this but this all sounds familiar. I'm pretty sure i read a similar situation to this.

"Yuki knows and he might tell Akito. I have to break up with him." Been done. I know, its really disappointing and it's happened to me too. No way we can really know if an idea is original or not without reading through the other thousands of stories out there. Still, thought you should know. )

Yeah. Nice ~

At least Kyo is nice about it. I like the strawberry jokes even though they remind me of bleach. Why does Kyo look so much like Ichigo anyways? Its the strawberry connection.

But again, thank you for being nice about it. Fangirls tend to get so caught up in the hearts and rainbows that they forget one simple fact. It hurts like all hell i mean seriously. I'll be reading some other girls idea of how it should go and that poor uke gets absolutely nothing to make it easier. That right there is just cruel. Not a fun thing to go through x.x

Aha! You are learning! I smell the beginnings of a plot! And acknowledging plot is what actually makes a story! There are days for just grabbing a good smut but if nobody ever had PLOT then there would be no stories and shows like Fruits Basket (and everything else for that matter) would cease to exist.

I admit, i had a bit of a heart attack moment here. Even though i reviewed last chapter, i thought i was on a one shot so Kyo is horny and Haru is horny and they go upstairs and its over.

WHAT! Oh! Oh, duh. I'm an idiot. Thank god for me being an idiot XD

How do they... what? Trying to figure that out is gonna be the biggest headache of Yuki's life, i just know it X3

Kudos to you SBD, Kyo/Haru is the best Fruits Basket couple out rhere and i am god so what i say goes... Well fine, A god... not like anyone's paying attention anyways.

But yes. I approve. I think Kyo/Haru needs more love. I say love, that does NOT include the scores of oneshots out there where Haru goes black and rapes his kitty into next week.

Actually, your oneshots are some of the few decent ones i've seen. More love for Kyo/Haru!

Heyy.

IT'S SO GOOD!

NEED MOREE!

:]

please next ch. asap!

YAY! Ok, first, I am a HUGE fan of yours. I love all of your work. Right now i'm in the process of rereading everything & leaving reviews. Please update this soon! it really is a wonderful story.