wow i love this this is the best link x dark link lemon i have read yet and i read a lot of that

This is totally awesome! And you left it as a cliffhanger! How could you!? Well I guess it's easy to leave it that way. I hope to see more one day. _
Cheers!

YOU SAID YOU PROMISED AND ITS FRICKING 2013 AND THE LAST TIME YOU UPDATED WAS 4 YEARS AGO DAMMNIT PLEASE I JUST CANT BARE A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THIS ;A;

Okay, but I'm only reviewing because Link wants me to.

I can't disappoint him. :(

I think it's faaaaaantastic. I read your Prologue thing a long time ago, back when these follow up chapters didnt exist. So, now Im happy I read it again because these are all new chapters :D

A few grammar and PoV errors...but I think thats it for now. :)

That long line of e's from the word review just made Want to burst into loud laughter but I couldn't; it was very late and I didn't want to wake anyone up.

Seriously though that was freakin hilarious.

This story seems awesome. First chap hooked me!

Hmmm. Yeah I dont care if its short; you made your point ;).

The only way Link goes down without a fight is if he's pinned against the wall. Only possible way. Its not rape if hes not backed into a corner. Yup. 333. :)

;)))))))

Much better than what I could have come up with.

I'm still trying to get together my own Lemon scene.

hm. Its not working out. So I'll just keep reading yours for Inspiration :D

i really liked this chapter, it was comical...

READ OVER YOUR WORK!

and pick a style either first or second i don't care but i advise you to pick one!

and if some ones talking you start another line.

eg.

"i beg your pardon!"

"oh, do shut up"

he swung his feet over the other side and stood up...

you were doing so well then you kinder stuffed it.

sigh...shame all well maybe you can fix it.

good luck with the rest tho and apart from that the story was intersting so far... and please go through the rest of the story.

good luck sevier with the rest of the story tho and hope you have fun writting it.

!

apart from a few things it's good so far i like it.

i can help with the spell cheak if you want...

good story so far and good luck with the rest.

i think you should read over it slow and from the start for chapter seven.

you go tho i love it so far.

aw fluffy cha[ter and very eotic as well

OMG Dark at least i hope its dark

O_O who wasthat woman im guessing Zelda but i could be wrong other wise a hypnotised zelda

aww love the fluff

omg now link is confused

oo i hope things work out poor Dark X Link they both just need love