Reviews for Experiment A
Pepparine chapter 18 . 5/28/2019
yo man this is 2019 and i fucking love this
Sorayano chapter 18 . 4/10/2019
It's so beautiful! Thanks!
Guest chapter 5 . 10/25/2017
Ed, why do you let them know your weak points? Poor Roy and Ed are stuck now.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/25/2017
Ed is definitely stringing them along. Sure all of team Mustang is freaking out at this point. Bet they won't be happy to see each other... Also, that lady is awful and I retract my previous statement on her humanity.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/25/2017
I'm guessing that Roy is the victim Calvary come to get things more messed up... :(
Guest chapter 2 . 10/25/2017
At least she has enough humanity to feel guilty.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2017
It's interesting to have the scientists logs. Great start. Poor Ed... How could they think this was a brilliant plan?
AlexandraGaler chapter 18 . 7/1/2017
*sighs contentedly* that was beautiful.
kenni-bun bun chapter 18 . 9/7/2016
I'm so glad that ed didn't let them control him too much, he let them get into his head a bit, but he was strong. Poor adult Riley, but he did help them.
Mylee2223 chapter 18 . 6/3/2016
I loved it but man that was some ducked up stuff you wrote don't get the wrong idea the story had a nice pace plot and it was coherent I also enjoyed how you had that crazy keep a journal. Loved the fic and I'm happy it was mostly a happy ending yeah Edward had to disapear and Edwina took his place but ya gotta do what ya gotta do.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/20/2016
I know it's been a very long time since you wrote this, but unfortunately I can't bring myself to finish this story. The idea is fine, but Roy is just so OOC that I can't do it. Roy would have realized that Ed was influenced by a drug and would hash refused to take advantage of him in that way. And if he did go along with it, he would only pleasure Ed after a long thought process, no matter if he had hidden feelings for Ed.
Guest chapter 18 . 1/25/2016
A great story! You also rationalized Mpreg- and in a way that I'd be logical with RoyEd too, because, let's face it, as much as we'd like him to, Ed wouldn't willingly become the 'mother'. Well done!
peachflavorr chapter 18 . 11/6/2015
It was paced well arms had a strong plot, good read.
Camille.Ad0 chapter 18 . 11/1/2015
j'aime bien la fin ˆˆ! j'ai eu un peu de mal au début, certaines réactions psychologiques étaient étranges. mais j'ai bien aimé quand même ˆˆ
Olahomro chapter 18 . 7/22/2014
Ooooohhhh. Pet names. c:
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