Interesting and haunting. I have never liked that Morzan's reasons for doing all he did was never explained, and no just because he is "evil" is not an answer. I like that you gave him human feelings and regrets in this story.

That was sad. I actually feel sorry for Morzan now.

pretty good. i'm sry i suck at reviewing and if you know, io'm trying to write a fic and want to know what color eyes murtagh has. in one ff, he had blue eyes, another green eyes, another brown eyes and in another gray eyes. i'm so confused?

I'm a bad reviewer, but that was a really great story. In my opinion, better than most of the other stories.

I love your parodies, though! Make more of those please!

Wow. That was really, er, interesting to read. I liked it.

Aww I like it... it shows him in a good way and makes you glad that Eragon and Murtagh weren't sired by a complete monster. Love it!

x Angel

ah yes it was confusing but i get it! sad, but i hate feeling sorry for the bad guys! o poor lil murtagh! perfectly .

Love this!

*sob*

so sad!

Wow... Thats all I can really say. This was great. I love it alot. I like how you showed an aspect of Morzan that no one would think of. Absolutely brilliant.

So even if a sinner repents and is given forgiveness by someone who is pure, it just isn't enough? Hm. I rather like that concept. It's rather becoming of Morzan and Selena's fate, whatever that may be. Good work.

yay! someone other than us writing a SelenaXMorzan fic!

i liked how you compared Morzan's crimes to the tower of Babylon. very interesting and original. _